Living In This World
 

yea written an recorded in 45 mins yesterday couple audio vets said mah flow sounds smoother an i sound more comfortable on tha mic leave some feed...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/virtueusmusic.htm

k

listening....

beat is nice..comes in well..nice hook. ur vocals could be a lil louder...quality is decent...ur soundin a bit montone get some emotion up in there - sounds like u readin 4sho...flow is on beat and solid...lyrical content is pretty dope in places..not bad homie good track, keep em comin :thumbup:

RTF - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181190

weerd glad you enjoyed it...:) apreciate tha feed ill hit that up ina min....

ok i'm listening right now....ya flow was cool on this beat.....nice...if you woulda put a little more emotion in it..it woulda been pretty damn sick...overall it was pretty cool man....the beat was hella hard..and you stayed on beat....but you shoulda made ya verse longer on the first part..but cool drop man...feelin this.....overall 7.5/10 if there was more emotion 8/10

listening right now, Yo i like the Start and the intro was tight, Yah voice is coo too, Flow was tight, kinda falls off a little bit some places, but overall its tight, Lyrics were dope also.. I liked yah first verse the most.. But nice drop hommie.. keepp it comming!!!

iight, this wasn't bad... i was impressed, it was better than some of the joints I've seen of yours a while back, so ur definately improving, only 2 things Ima say is turn up your vocals more, I suggest while in the cleaning process you amplify your vocals a few decibels, and also u sound a little shy on the mic... just be aware of that and u can work on fixin it over time... not bad drop, keep doin it and make sure u leave feed on 2 tracks next time :throwup:

aiight apreciate tha feed all of you...

Listening: Intro a lil loud...but aight...beat nice slow smooth beat...flow good...some good lyrics well rhymed...a lil lower volume on the beat and up a lil on the vocals woulda been better but a good joint...but lyrics str8 nice track the things i mentioned you could use for future songs...

yeh people above me were right the intro is loud........................the flow is ok, delivery is ok, riding the beat, but not exactly perfect........deep shit though, u might want to fuck around with the mix a little bit if you did at all..........kind of losing your flow at points in the 2nd verse. not to bad though, then the pause after the second verse like you lost your bar count or something, you got to fill that in or bring the hook in earlier........just my two cents, not hating just trying to help, peace and hit me back up at
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...112#post2017112

I liek the beat. Shoulda been turned down a little though. Overwpoers your vocals big time. You got some net-flow going on in some places. Needs a heavy dose of more emotion. Some adlibs wouldn't have hurt it. Would have made some of the track popout more. Second verse is louder and clearer than the first, flowed a little better, but I'm convinced; you need a mic. ASAP. There's some great lyrics in here that are getting beat up by your emotionless deliv. This is gonna be one of those tracks you'll probably want to come back and re-do whne you get more comfy rhyming. All in all an okay track that could have been a really good track with minor adjustments.

thankz for droppin some feed dooms...:)

it was nice lyrically....ur flow was gud to me...beat was ehhh.....u sound kinda incomfertable on the mic u need more presence.....cuz sounduncomfertable like your jus reading it.....but besides that its pretty gud jus work on some stuff word

ecko........:) lmao thnkz apreciate tha feed.......