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New Song....Peep..
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www.soundclick.com/jayjking its the song "its for you" i think..... links ------ http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2016603 i'mma get the other link in a min |
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yo quality was kinda shakey, yah lyrics were dope, but yah kinda fell off the flow a bit, but overall you kept it together, beat was kind gay thow, but yah did a good job wit it... good dro hommie... peace..
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word famz...thanks for the feedback.....and i got you in ya new song Shots Fired....that was a cool track.....anyways.....uppin
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Uppin for feed...i left feed on like 15 songs
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well thats the last time i leave feed on anyones work.....UPPPIN
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well thats the last time i leave feed on anyones work.....UPPPIN :cussing: :cussing: :cussing:
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yea...kinda hissy...easi;y fixable...
i like ur voice but this mushy ll shit I aint too much into... and u sang for too damn long...this aint american Idol nigga not a bad track... |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181336 return the favor
listening......................smooth type beat.......really feeling the that beat, you make that?...............you got a slow smooth beat, like guy said it is that mushy type shit, and I dont feel it either LL cool J type I need love, but its ok................that girl why, cant you see etc, that needs some work, repeats to much...........I wasnt really feeling it, but thats not to say it wasnt a bad song. My girl would probably like it, and the girl you did it for will probably like it, and thats the audience you were targeting, so its not bad |
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