the kid 523 vs Invektive
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 Ko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-11-05 at 05:48 PM

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the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 05:22 PM.

im sick of stupid lil pricks like these
tryna front on niggas knowin they fake mc's
invektives a homo i bet
i know his rappin sucks.. n i aint even seen his shit yet
this crackas gay
ill rip him like a paper mache
im outta control, on patrol
to lyrically defeat n physically beat
any mc who wanna take shots at me
so imma step back n catch my breath
im spittin rhymes until thea aint none left

Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-11-05 05:36 PM.

uppin for the easy win......like i said................

Voted For: Invektive

Punches- Invektive..By Far..
Personals- None Of Yall Yo
Vocab- Both Was Very Basic From Both
Wordplay- Lol..U Serious?..Invektive Got This..
Multi- Blah
Vote- Invektive..

Sup Wit Our Battle..

^^^ thanks....uppin for more votes...go ahead and get this KO over with

Voted For: Invektive

wow this was an easy one Invektive.. had nice punches the whole way thru.. god flow and structure.. the other kid had nothing but elementary school garbage he got raped.. invektive u coulda went half as hard and still won.. so i dont relaly think i need to explain myself much more.. the kids verse explains it enough invektive wins punches personals strcture flow wordplay vocab.. the works.. im out..

uppin for the KO.........................../..................

This was feedback posted for Invektive
 

checkin pollzzzzz.....................................

Voted For: Invektive

heres how i saw this battle:

structure: this category goes to invektive... nice flow, good rhyme scheme, consistent... kid, your structure was off... try to keep your lines the same length, that'll help...

vocab: invektive gets this on the count of using more creative vocabulary and incorporating it well into his verse and keepin a decent flow

punches: invektive's definitely hit harder... not much wordplay, but good personals and aight metas... kid you gotta elevate this part of your game if you wanna battle... punches were weak, no wordplay or personals, and paper mache was the only attempt at a meta, and it was kinda weak

overall: this was an easy win for invektive for those reasons i outlined above, no hate jus elevate

return the favor please links in sig

uppin............................................. ..

Voted For: Invektive

V/Invektive this was a one sided batttle invek took this wit harder hittin punchs an personals also better structure overall better...kid u need to work on ur structure an ur punchs u had none an no personals...no hate RETURN THE FAVOR
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Voted For: Invektive

Invektive- you had a nice verse.. shit how do u fit so much into one verse? ha .. but over al you had some really good punches..."i hate to tarnish your image man...i know your heart might be sore
do us all a favor and leave RapVerse.com..we would like you more" haha that was jus mean.. but i liked it none the less but yea youhad better metas and a better structure.. nice verse

Kid 523 -You need alot of work... work on your structure and your punches... fix your your vocab. and think about your shit mroe when you are writing it .. come join first floor we will help you elevate alot.. but over all you reallly need work .. you didn't really have rhymes and you need to work on your vocab..come and join first floor you need the help...

Vote//Invektive

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