Kordozar vs ::..:$lobK::..:
 

Battle Rules:
Punchline battle

2 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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CLosed.. did not meet 6 line site minimum

Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 12:21 AM.

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::..:$lobK::..: has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 12:34 AM.

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

yo dawg nice spit man i liked your structure and werdplay nice multis and nice opener and closer all of the above was better man gimme a pm dawg you should join my crew homie

hey kord nice werdplay but you lacked in everything else

quit duckin our battle

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your such a bitch man why wont you battle me gimme a good reason you fuckin bitch

^^^Cuz U A Herb..Lol..Move Away From This Thread..

Uppin

Voted For: Kordozar

kordazar gets this...his used better wordplay...and that personal was killer...

slobk...that was nice...but u spent a little too much of ur punches on calling him a fag or wutever...dont do that...go str8 from wordplay to punchline...

both were good but...

v/ Kordazar

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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

i dont think i need a complete explained vote for this cause of the 2 line battle ight

Kord
that was ight i wasnt feeling the punch the opener line was alright but the finsher was pretty damn wack i wasnt feeling it at all, try workin wit that, ive seen way better bars then this

Slob
not as great as i seen from you in normal lined battles but this was pretty good i was feeling the whole bar but i dont think you need to show punches or anything like that theres no need on these kinds of battles, just write the bar and drop but it was good you got this better set up line then better converting to the actual punch itself...peace

RTF in my battle vs. AMH links in the sig

Voted For: Kordozar


One Sides Man Kord Takes This One Bar Punch Is A Killer, Slobk Your Bar Was Played Son I Used That Way Back Do Not Do That Man, Humur Was Kordozar Man, This One Sided Battle Come On Aint Much T oSay Really Kordozar Had The Best Punch, And Ish

RTF Kordozar THe Link Is In My Sig And Explain That Bish Well Hommie

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 

Kor- alright good punch, simple though. Personal with a punch. Meh it wasn't ya best one in a battle, but anyway, good punch.



Slobk- Ya had an direct punch, good.Played though, gay punches are played out.......Anyway it's still a good punch. With a personal.


Overall=This battle like...weak, Kor ya punch was simple and not hard hitting even though you had an personal with a punch. Slob good punch it was hard hitting even though it was played out (gay punches), with a personal. So my vote goes to Slobk for harder punch bar.


Pz

O shit that was boust to be a vote...............change it mods.........