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yo man i just try ta spit werds and niggaz think they can talk shit well fuck them they dont know rap then!!!

v1
yo..yo.. posers and emcees prayin on both knees hopefully we can act socially, im actin emotionally, but upmostly, phive is now free
imma go on lyrically, im rappin hardcore cant you see,
im rippin mad tracks cuz phive is me//
im back recount the stack, removin my wanted posters that held wit a thumb tack, fick jail dawg i didnt want that,
now im the fat cat, fuck the gat, if i want you hurt dawg i go crisp wit da bat//
chorus
phive is the name i was given,
ive died four times phive is liven,
tracks im hitten,
im rappin mad dawg cuz this shit is crazy written,
im the rap king i hit wit a sting,
mutha fuckas talk but neva bring,
ya betta step back when phives rapping,
cuz i ko street bitches when i hit the ring,
v2
i calculate lyrics in my head like a mathemetician,
i play tricks on suckas like a mad magician,
believin in every religeon,
even though im christian,
punches never missin,
bitches im mackin and the pussy im kissin,
always dissin,
the mouths i piss in,
phives shined ta glisten,
so yall listen,
cuz phive has risen,
v3
i send messages to you from above,
people dont show no love,
catchin death with a glove,
screamin weve had enuf,
wi armada up hes mad tuff,
rap style enclosing like a hand cuff,
leave playazloose like a used muff,
phive still spittin rap and stuff//

peace

yo this was some good shit here veres three wasnt as good as the first 2 rhymes were crazy multis were ight nice aggresion in this shit here...good job...u definitely elevated
8/10
we should do a collab sometime pm me dwag

please return the favor in my open mic "bitterphobia" link in my sig peace

not really feeling it alot of forced rhymes and really bad stucutre just aint really feeling this ish, try upping vocab a lil more and adding some better emotion and be more creative then you might be somin HA, but this was ight i guess pz

thanx x-cell
yo parallel whatever man you dont know shit g

uppin fo some feedback homies

uppin fo some feed back playazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Meh forced rhymes, it flowed ok. Strucutre wasnt at it's best peak. But ya need to elevate a little more. DOnt force your rhymes....


Keep dropping.

than man uppin fo feed back yo lemme join ya crew mistah aight

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this is cool man...feelin the progression but kinda back offed in the third verse but it wasn't a bad back but like "i'm mirk this no need for overkill" keep at it...peep my open...MULTI-VERSE...

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