David vs GlocKoma
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-12-05 at 06:16 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

David has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 05:47 AM.

GlocKoma has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 06:13 AM.

Aight lets get down to bizness wit this Lyricle Distruction,
Get him cussin cause nobody said hi in the mcee introduction,
and by the way "Epic" im not ya brotha or ya cuzzin,
And ide hate to be the person to put you in the coma,
but ima bust in your eye so fast it will give you CocKoma,
How did i know it was you?...you put everything in all caps,
get you sweatin im blessin wit this lyricle session you runnin laps,
like a crippled dude thats irrelevent when he raps with his speech inpedament.
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no beef........just speakin the truth.....holla

*Yawn*

David Verses G? If "Aliath" Followed You Still Couldn't Biblically-Win..
Fuck David... See? I'll Strait "Take Your Name In Vain" And Lyrically-Sin..

You Just "Act Elvevated".. So I'll Do A Retake-And-Lower-Him..
Then I'll Strait Out "(W)rap Da Vid" Like I Waz Tapin'-Over-Him..!!

You Just Aint On My Level... You'll Stay "Behind My Bars" And Be-Jailed..
Cuz Even If You "Saw A Bride Before The Wedding" You Still Couldn't Pre-Vail..!!

*David Vs Galiath...
*Acting, Retake... Vid = Video...
*Bride Wears A Vail...

Uppin............................................. ........

This was feedback posted for GlocKoma
 

You Just "Act Elvevated".. So I'll Do A Retake-And-Lower-Him..
Then I'll Strait Out "(W)rap Da Vid" Like I Waz Tapin'-Over-Him..!!
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sick as hell

Cuz Even If You "Saw A Bride Before The Wedding" You Still Couldn't Pre-Vail..!!
^^^
dope stuff

Nice shit Glock, first time i saw ya flows

only flaw is....ya shouldnt seperate bars like that, but u still got this win 4sho dog....

Aight... I Won't Seperate My Bars Any More... I Can Adapt To Any Site... Any Battle...

Uppin'...

Voted For: GlocKoma

Glock Killed David .. Usin 'ROCK SOLID PUNCHES'

Punches - Glock
Flow - Glock
Structure - Glock
Meta - Glock
Multies - none
Opener - Glock
Closer - Glock

Vote Glock ..

Return the favor ...

Voted For: GlocKoma

this was a pretty good battle between u 2 here's my overview:

GlocKoma- ight, ur punches were pretty nice, original
non-played out..wordplay was there..flowed
real nice..u got a couple of multi's..meta's
were on point
David- ya opener seemed a lil forced..a few played out
lines in ur verse..wordplay was ok..it seems u
tryed real hard 2 make it flow..meta's were ight..
multi's were here & there
Overall- GlocKoma won this battle in my opinion 4 his
originality that stood out ova David's in all
aspects no hating

make sure 2 return the favor in my battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=180963

Uppin this.........................................

This was feedback posted for GlocKoma
 

Both come nice checking polls,..

Stay up

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Voted For: GlocKoma

David Verses G? If "Aliath" Followed You Still Couldn't Biblically-Win..
Fuck David... See? I'll Strait "Take Your Name In Vain" And Lyrically-Sin..
^^^NICE PUNCH/NAME PLAY
You Just "Act Elvevated".. So I'll Do A Retake-And-Lower-Him..
Then I'll Strait Out "(W)rap Da Vid" Like I Waz Tapin'-Over-Him..!!
^^^I GET DA...DA VID PART..BUT DA (W)RAP LIKE U WAS TAPIN OVER HIM SHIT DONT MAKE SENSE
You Just Aint On My Level... You'll Stay "Behind My Bars" And Be-Jailed..
Cuz Even If You "Saw A Bride Before The Wedding" You Still Couldn't Pre-Vail..!!
^^^LOL DAT WAS HOTT RITE THERE..GOOD CLOSER

Aight lets get down to bizness wit this Lyricle Distruction,
Get him cussin cause nobody said hi in the mcee introduction,
^^LOL NICE OPENER
and by the way "Epic" im not ya brotha or ya cuzzin,
^^^???? WHERE'S DA NEXT LINE FAM

And ide hate to be the person to put you in the coma,
but ima bust in your eye so fast it will give you CocKoma,
^^^WOW FAM DATZ GAY RITE THERE
How did i know it was you?...you put everything in all caps,
get you sweatin im blessin wit this lyricle session you runnin laps,
^^^WEAK
like a crippled dude thats irrelevent when he raps with his speech inpedament
^^^REAL WEAK....

OVERALL:GLOCK TAKES DIS EASILY WITH HIS CREATIVITY AND PUNCHLINES...DAVID U LOOK LIKE U HAD SOME POTENTIAL BUT LIKE TOWARDS DA END U FEEL OFF

LINK IN MY SIG RETURN DA FAVOR OR I WILL SEND A VIRUS 2 YA COMPUTER

This was feedback posted for GlocKoma
 

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Voted For: GlocKoma

this was pretty easy

im giving this to glockoma...your punches hit and were well thoughtout, you had nice personals/plays of his name...you stayed consistent dissin him, nice multies....structure could a little nice....but it flowed nicely...although, the behind my bars line, that is kinda played, only real problem with your verse...but overall....this verse was actually really nice, good vocab and wordplay which added effectiveness to your punches, and your shit was entertaining too

david, i dunno man, you werent really dissin glock at all, you just kinda was rappin randomly....you had some attempts at personals, but poor vocab/wordplay just made them sound weird, i dunno, looked like you didnt try, and thats not why your gettin my vote because, really, you didnt come hard at all, no connecting punches, few personals, but they were weak....no hate, but you still gotta elevate

v/glockoma