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::..:$lobK::..: vs phive
Battle Rules:
10-12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-15-05 at 11:44 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 08:42 PM.
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aight man imma spit a verse or two,
no writtens G, imma think it through, make you feel broken, and empty inside, you can run but ya cant hide, fuck depression, i hit with pure pride, im the one you hear about but neva see, im the one you dress up ta be, yur givin up so ya bow down on one knee, im leadin ya like a lyrical ghandi, the lyrics i spit hit with mad passion, verses line up in single fassion, imma finish you off like a crazy nerd wit a mack ten, |
::..:$lobK::..: has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 11:52 PM.
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This Fagget I Despise..Put A 'Wing' On His 'Watch' So He Could See How 'Time' Flies'.. Den Force Homie To 'Smoke' Till He Drop..Dats Da Only Way Ull Get 'High' 'Phive'(s).. Face Facts Yo..You Get Excited When You Supposedly Battle Men.. I Can Tell From The Way U On Kordozar Dick..Just For U To Battle Him..* Yo Listen..Imma Take 'Phive'..Like Lazy 'Movie Directors'.. U Only See Homie Location..Cuz He Embarassed Bout His Battle Record.. Posted 'Phive' B.Slap Threads..Lookin For A Battle Wit Nerds.. He Tryna 'Plant' Wins..But Homie Everybody Already Know U A 'Herb'.. Battle Mixed A 'Hot' Verse With A 'Cold' One..Of Course Its Causin Fogs.. And Imma Resolve This..By Murkin Him In 'Phive' Barz.. ******************* Homie Is On Kord Dick To Battle Him Yo..Every Minute He Beggin Him..Lol |
Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:
V/$lobk....this was a good battle but he gets my vote he came out wit punchs that hit hard an good personals his structure was on point...phive ur elavating alot ur structure is better an some ur lines but u need to work on ur punchs/diss's u need to come up wit more vocab but i've seen improvment no hate...good battle RETURN THE FAVOR.... opner=$ closer=$ punchs=$ structure=tie overall=$lobk |
This was feedback posted for phive
hahahahha lames verse ever no metas no punches no personal no multis just whackness
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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:
slobk got this 1 for personals...wordplay...metas...and structure...u had way better flow...and ur verse was overall better... phive...u need work on punches...especially personals...flow...wordplay...and multies...hit up a tutorial or 2...u got hella potential tho... v/ slobk |
Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:
up the personals but overall i liked yours better........... |
Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:
::..:$lobK::..: - nice flow, nice metas...some real nice punches in there..and u had some dope ass personals too..good battle, u took it phive - i hated how short ur lines were, too choppy, didn't give u enough room to have any real good punches which are probably the most important part of a battle...change ur structure and you'll improve vote = ::..:$lobK::..: Retur The Favor...Link in Sig |
Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:
slobk won this phive verse was pretty lame in my opinion his punches didnt have no meaning he mainly talked about himself through his verse which was very lame slobk punches and metaphors where ok not decent but ok he had more creativity in some of his punches slobk gets my vote |
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