K-Trini vs Young Blaze
 

Battle Rules:
10- 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-12-05 at 05:26 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

K-Trini has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 05:00 PM.

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 05:14 PM.

Young Blaze,goin through a genital phase,must be one of them days/
You 3-0,but deserve no praise,cause your flows don't amaze/
Bith you swear you the fatha and your style gon give you dollars/
But your styles nada,you just a lost puppy without the collar/
How can K-trini lose to jersey? the home of all the nerdys/
Mean streets a Jersey,so gangsta,sitting on the balcony drinking tea in jersey/
I saw ur last battle,talkin bout kit-kats,you only won by killin a newbie/
u rap on the net cause you a white boy with baby fat and goes to school to geta degree/
U can't say zap bout me being trini,cause I'll knock you out with a cricket bat
U can't say I'm whack cause I ain't black cause take a look at where your'e at/


Yeah watever guys I'm whack and I need work.........

im known to get hectic when my mother fukin teks blown/
And you’ve just steped into a mother fukin dead zone, Blaze got ya bones grindin metal like skateboarders at the X dome/

break my foot off in your ass lets get violent when it comes to voting for you, the whole poll will be silent/
Go ahead, cop some verses and cheat, ill let you.. like Miss. Kobe Bryant/
this be for the set score, cos im known to wet more, than Trini, RV’s own wet net whore/
I’ll be driving around your block winnin another text war, using my pen gore to leave him over and out like a truckers ten four/ (haha)
i plaster nerves on master herbs , cos i bend you outta shape like clarity to charity and cash for turds/
smash ya words, as we clash with verbs, cos your excited to see me like when girls flash for nerds/
Who you know that can quicken hits when hittin' pricks with written scripts/
get to spittin' sick an' pump your body full of wet cement an laxatives so you can be shittin bricks/

Are you religious? Cos your rhymes reflects the pope, old frail and stupid so like Nixon don’t be expecting a vote/
im a man of my word so I can respect him as dope, but when I say trini got no balls.. its only cos I never checked in his throat/

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Voted For: Young Blaze

shit, was a pretty close battle, heres what i see....

young blaze, i thought you had the harder punches, but to be honest, you almost lost my vote on the account of your structure, you have to tune that down a bit....alot of your lines seem stretched and also seems like your forcing rhymes, thats not good, but your opponent didnt come that hard, so your lucky, haha, just fix up your structure....but overall, you had a pretty consistent drop, some nice creative, funny punches....few personals, not really though, good attempt at multies, most were just simple, but you could get the hang of it by elevating....

ktrini....thought you came pretty weak in this battle, and your punches and personals showed that, looked like there was no thought at all in them, plain shit, vocab was too easy, no wordplay...you attempted some multies, but you need to elevate your vocab and wordplay alot.....your structure and flow, though, however, were alright, that wasnt really a problem for you........you lost my vote because overall you came really weak and it was like reading a kids book of rhymes....sorry man, not hate

v/young blaze......rtf, honest explained vote plz. on either OneStepBeyond or Chowie Chow....thanks yo

Voted For: Young Blaze

heres how i saw this one...

flow/structure: i gave this to trini... seemed like blaze stretched his bars to get more multis in the 12 line max

wordplay/punches: blaze gets this... but the wordplay didnt really lead to punches all the time, like the girls flash for nerds line was aight, but what's the insult? the shittin bricks line was cool too, but it could've been worded better... on the other end, trini had no wordplay, and weak punches, so i really couldnt give him the vote in this category

overall, a battle is about punching and i felt like blaze had the harder hitting punches and more creative concepts... ive seen better from you blaze, but he gets my vote anyway

return the favor please links in sig

Voted For: Young Blaze

LMMFAO at tha ending line, hahaha. vote= young blaze. k-trini, u didnt really have any good punches.

How can K-trini lose to jersey? the home of all the nerdys/

nerdys? that wuz just stupid az fuck, lol, no hate, but young blaze got this, werd

Voted For: Young Blaze

blaze took this. you had some decent punchz and multis, although some of tha lines didn't flow too well cos they were too uneven..but good shit anyway..feelin tha ten four line.

trini, you were outdone this time, but you'll pick shit up and start droppin better verses in no time..try bringin in a bit more complexity.


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Voted For: Young Blaze

k-trini- ur verse was tite at the beginning...but somewhere around the 4th line...u just lost it...it didnt make sense n e more...work on ur flow...and structure...and especially punches/personals...try not to make ur punches so complicated...ur teyin too hard...

young blaze- nice verse...punches...personals...structure...flow...a ll good...ur verse packed more on point punches than his...his were more like jokes than punches...overall nice drop...

v/ young blaze