the kid 523 vs XKwizit
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
3 Bars

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-12-05 at 11:11 PM

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the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 10:33 PM.

This battle was a waste of time. Yeah, im the kid but im gonna win
For lettin you in, "The Council" might need some councilin

You shouldnt even be here, your just embarrassin yourself G.
Everyones going to be laughing at you when you get beat by a Noob

You possibly think you have a chance beating, you must be on crack
RV told you to leave the site... what the FUCK are you doing back?

XKwizit has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-12-05 10:59 PM.

This kid can't GET-BADDER, his verse stinks like a BITCHES-BLADDER,
I MERK-RAPERS, so Watch Me 'Take Out' Kid Like MANIAC-KIDNAPPERS !! 1

This kid is FUCK-HARDER, I COOK-SLAUGHTER, Make him scream soo he can SPIT-LOUDER
Cuz We All Know Xkwizit Beats 'KID' Like CORRUP-FATHERS !! 2

I better
your not .. i win .. your shot 3 ..

They never told me to leave this site . *SMH

Voted For: the kid 523

the kid wins imo...he actually made sense....x looks like u know what ur doing...but the vocab u waz tryin 2 use didnt go right wit a damn thing u were saying...louder and father doesnt really rhyme.....so based on that my vote goes to the kid.............return the favor kid.......

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uppin this shit for more votes..........................

uppin this shit for more votes.. votee now........

Voted For: XKwizit

Aii Ima compare this 6 line battle Pieceby Piece

Aii

Openers
This kid can't GET-BADDER, his verse stinks like a BITCHES-BLADDER,
I MERK-RAPERS, so Watch Me 'Take Out' Kid Like MANIAC-KIDNAPPERS !! 1
Vs
This battle was a waste of time. Yeah, im the kid but im gonna win
For lettin you in, "The Council" might need some councilin

Aii first of all Kid ....Stop Tryin Stab With a spoon .....Xkwizit Takes off in this battle way harder Than The kid

The rest of the battle
You shouldnt even be here, your just embarrassin yourself G.
Everyones going to be laughing at you when you get beat by a Noob

You possibly think you have a chance beating, you must be on crack
RV told you to leave the site... what the FUCK are you doing back?

Aii That was betta than Ya Other bars still Not Stroing enough to take the battle If you ask me

This kid is FUCK-HARDER, I COOK-SLAUGHTER, Make him scream soo he can SPIT-LOUDER
Cuz We All Know Xkwizit Beats 'KID' Like CORRUP-FATHERS !! 2

I better
your not .. i win .. your shot 3 ..

Stop Wastin Bars Mayne LOL ....The last Line wasnt even a bar and you still Take This Battle But Barely

My Vote

Xkwizit

Please RTF In The link In my Sig PLEASE


PLEASE RTF !!!!

Voted For: XKwizit

lol easy one again,iight the kid,ive notice that in everybattle you always talk about the same thing,its like bittin but puttin it diferently,you always talk about you winning,thats what your talkin about in the three lines,thats a bad thing to do,but you already elevated from what i see,need help just PM me ill help you out,
XKwizit : had a way better verse,nice rymes and shit,
This kid is FUCK-HARDER, I COOK-SLAUGHTER, Make him scream soo he can SPIT-LOUDER
that was funny,nice verse
Vote: XKwizit

Voted For: XKwizit

well.......what a fuckin dumb battle, both need to elevate

giving it to Xkwisit....for decent punches........kid, still dont have anything decent,...plus, you bite your lines...not really much to explain either....elevate, both of you, alot

v/xkwisjataga

Voted For: XKwizit

The kid- displayed little complexity but your personals were ok I geuss nothing really hard hitting flow and structure not bad ok vocab. It would be nice to see more complexity in your puches though.

XKwizit- More complex than the kid no personals. I liked your rhymes and flow more too. Whats with the last line though it didnt rhyme. I didnt like ya structure but structures bullshit anyway.

Overall- This was close Xkwizit had punches kid had personals but I'm givven it to X.


Return the favor plz
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182374

Voted For: XKwizit

XKwizit
This kid can't GET-BADDER, his verse stinks like a BITCHES-BLADDER,
I MERK-RAPERS, so Watch Me 'Take Out' Kid Like MANIAC-KIDNAPPERS !! 1

This kid is FUCK-HARDER, I COOK-SLAUGHTER, Make him scream soo he can SPIT-LOUDER- GOOD LINE
Cuz We All Know Xkwizit Beats 'KID' Like CORRUP-FATHERS !! 2

like the punches
good structure
iight verse
work on elevatin

7/10

The Kid 523
This battle was a waste of time. Yeah, im the kid but im gonna win
For lettin you in, "The Council" might need some councilin

You shouldnt even be here, your just embarrassin yourself G.
Everyones going to be laughing at you when you get beat by a Noob

You possibly think you have a chance beating, you must be on crack
RV told you to leave the site... what the FUCK are you doing back?

middle 2 lines dont rhyme
sad verse
work on elevatin
work on structure

5/10

my v/XKwizit b/c of harder punches

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