the kid 523 vs wanadienigga
 

Battle Rules:


6 lines
3 bars

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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wanadienigga has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 12:50 AM.

the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 12:51 AM.

dawg u think u can talk about my mom well don't ill kill ya ya not familar boy and if i tried i'd probally die cause u so fat talkin about my mom and sayin shes fat dawg look at u peice shyoit this aint any of this baby shit like you kid your just a pussy and likes dick in ya!

Why do you insist on battleing me again
I already beat you the last time what makes you think your actually gonna win

I take your challenges lightly, bite me,
You should take it as a compliment to battle someone like The Kid 523

After im done .w you, its my ass youll be kissin
Next time you wanna battle me, bitch ask for permission

Voted For: the kid 523

kid's had better structure and flow......i had to read the other catz like 4 times...lol

uppinuppinuppinuppinuppinuppinuppinuppinuppinuppin

Voted For: the kid 523

V/the kid 523....he gets my vote cause he had better structure an had punchs but they were basic......wana u need to work on ur structure it was hard to read an ur punchs were basic also work on that an personals.......No hate
RETURN THE FAVOR
opener=t
closer=t
structure=t
vocab=t
punchs=t
personals=t
overall=the kid 523

Voted For: the kid 523

the kid 523, took this one, this wasnt even a battle
both of you need to elevate though, cuz this was a

weak battle here though

uppin this shit for the win already .................

uppin this shit for the win .. i kno its a wack battle it was one of my first n mad ppl aint been doin it cuz its wack just get it off rv n vote

Voted For: the kid 523

Wat the fuck is this??? Is this a battle???*shakes head*

The kid 523
PUnches:let me spell it g-a-r-b-a-g-e-
Personals:None
Structure:Way better than wanadienigga's
even tho his lines was strectched

Wanadienigga
LMAO at this character

Punches:None
Personals:None
Structure:More zig-zaged than a gay man's sexual preferences

Voted For: the kid 523

ok kid this was a little weak... ok alot a weak haha but yea i thought you took this one because you had a struct and you actually had a lil wordplay...

wanadienigga um you need work fix your structure and don't just smack talk people .. because it dosent win battles for ya .... o yea please please fix your spelling .... dawg look at u peice shyoit this aint

need i say more?

Vote//THEKID523