Op!n!on vs the kid 523
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-14-05 at 02:00 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed - more than 5 active battles open

the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 02:01 AM.

4-0 record, maybe youd get some respect
if you didnt target newbs, your just a reject

You joined in the beginning of Febuary
Been here for a while and your STILL new to RV.

I'll fuckin shit on you, get rid of you, your pitiful, what a disgrace
I'll fuckin stop spttin when theres no more shit to be rubbed in your face

Yeah, you beat me the first time.. all lucked
Op!n!ons still just one big pussy, waiting to get fucked

Op!n!on has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 02:39 AM.

Uppin this shit for some votes....................

Uppin this shit for some votes....................

Voted For: the kid 523

well in my opinion you killed this kid,

The kid, you had a beter verse by far, i mean you had punches and you had metaphores, your personals where not dope but good, nothing in your verse was dope but it was decent

opinion, your whole verse was self glorifactaion, your lines hwere either played or just dumb, lol, i kow your alias and i no that you probably transfer your record to get your alias a good record, but you honestly could have done alot beter, and that strucuture is funny, alll your lines where strectched, that is why you made your font small and centered it

vote=the kid

well, RTF, or battle me, either one is good enough for me

Voted For: Op!n!on

Op!n!on- you had alot of nice vocab. way better structure. you had better punches then 523. overall i thought you had a average verse.

Well we all know that you're wack, and that you can't rip a rhyme
I've KO'ed you once allready...time to do that shit a second timed
decent coulda done a lil more with it 5/10
Shit you're allready behind.......I'll be surprised if you get a vote
Man this battle was in my favour...before my verse was even wrote
again decent nothing special but still packed a punch 6/10
Give up the game, leave the site....you ain't nothing but a chump
Cuase kid you're more worthless than a legless man trying to jump
lines a lil played but still good..5/10

16/30


the kid 523 -



IP:

4-0 record, maybe youd get some respect
if you didnt target newbs, your just a reject
decent punch just didnt hit hard enough 3/10
You joined in the beginning of Febuary
Been here for a while and your STILL new to RV.
where is the rhyme n the punch?.. 2/10
I'll fuckin shit on you, get rid of you, your pitiful, what a disgrace
I'll fuckin stop spttin when theres no more shit to be rubbed in your face
ok you have a problem here you can trash talk but you need to put it into a good rhyme you had a good concept here you just didnt use it enough..1/10
Yeah, you beat me the first time.. all lucked
Op!n!ons still just one big pussy, waiting to get fucked
don't force rhymes...

6/30

over all op!n!on took it with better structure and better vocab.

Vote//Op!n!on

Prophysics

^ Fuck you hate voter.

Uppin for some more votes.

I said..................Uppin for some more votes.

Voted For: the kid 523

I think the kid took this one, cause at least he tried not to be simple. Opinion, your verse was too simple to me, and i dont think that you came hard. i think you underestimated him. The kid, you should work on your structure, and better wordplay. Opinion, you should work on hard punches, and better personals.
Overall-I gave this to The kid, cause i was feelin his verse more. Even tho this was a wack battle. The Kid had a bette personal in there, and Opinion, I didint really see nuthin big from you in yo verse. But i gave this to The kid cause of his personal, and a punch. No hate, just elevate urselves.

-peace

Voted For: Op!n!on

the kid
not feeling your style punches were on a weak roll, stucutre was horrible and the flow wasnt that great eather, some forced rhymes, and i wasnt feeling the verse one bit, try being more creative or something cuz your punches have no effect on this battle period.

Opnion
a way better verse the punches were alot better and the stucture was alot better the punches were what really came hard but you got this, seemed like a simple win for you, pz

RTF my links are in the sig

Voted For: the kid 523

the kid, i think he took this one. he had a few better personals in this one. even tho yo structure was mad off homie, i think u got this one. yo second bar was wack tho, but i was feelin tha rest more than opinion's verse.
opinion-yo vrse was iught, but mad simple. i wasnt feelin it too much. yo structure was better, but thats about it. you didnt really have a hard hittin diss in yo verse, it just seemed like some typin.
the kid takes this shit in my opinion. even tho both verses lacked, i think hte kid took it. no hate.....

and plz RTF on battle link at bottom of sig


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