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Dat Mixtape Ish
uh huh me and my boi Violator we doin dat ishl.....
He go first i go second my verse is kinda hard to hear cuz it was done at home..so imma drop da lyrics: www.soundclick.com/kontroverzymusic.htm Hot Ride...Hot Bitch...Konfliktz.. Hot Shit.. 6 Pack...Big Gat..Wrist Strapped..git Back.. Afro..White Tee...Fubu....Nike's... Wifey? Might Be..Shootin Like Spike lee.. Throwback Classics..Orlando Magics... Thats It..Strapped Wit..Auto..Matics.. Blast Clips...Fast Whips...Ego Massive.. Knuckles..Swollen..Walls I Punch Holes In.. Black hat..All Teams..Pockets All Green.. Jury..Four Clippz..We Need..More Clippz! links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=180661 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2020822 |
dope ass beat,i like this verse,the quality is iight,good drop
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thanx fam i appreciate it.....
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181336 return the favor
yeh you need to redo it, the quality is off...you might want to add some words here and there and take some out here and there,but a good drop, i like your rhyme sceme for real, you might want to just add some more shit, good drop though keep it up |
i didnt like the 1st dudes verse, quality is not too good i think cuz of dubs and effects, idk something seems off
beat is ight, kinda koo ur verse is easier to hear and understand, betta quality than 1st dude. lyrics are kinda basic wif a few good lines in there kinda short, but still ight 1 |
eeehhh....I actually enjoyed reading ur verse more than hearin it
decent at best...flow came off choppy...though I felt what you were tryna pull off not great...not bad = ok mic quality cuc be better and amped...as u said not bad tho 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181672 ^^RTF please |
word shit was an aiight drop..the rhyme scheme was his idea....and jea the lyrics was aiight....
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listening to it now.. I like the beat.. who's that at the beggining? well i didn't like the first verse.. but nice multi's.. ur rhyme scheme's nice n enjoyed that but the quality was aight.. heard better from you but what made the song good was your beat.. but dude u sorta sound like a kid on here? lol no offense.. but overall pretty good..8/10
plz leave feed on my song "I Promise" |
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