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Evolution vs metaman
Battle Rules:
8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 = KO Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 03-17-05 at 07:07 PM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. |
Evolution has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 07:08 PM.
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I’ll come half-assed, & your rhymes are easy to break like foam
But your punches are getting old too... ................................................go put them in the retirement home This kid thinks this is all fun & games, hah, your just prattle* You’d have to get an alias... to vote on your own matches, just for you to win your battles Look at this hoe, trying to act ill, your punches won’t even hit His drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don’t want to hear it Why am I facing you? You’re just a waste of time You’ll never elevate son... ...cuz you already having trouble trying to rhyme Key’d *Prattle means: idle or foolish and irrelevant talk |
I’ll come half-assed, & your rhymes are easy to break like foam
But your punches are getting old too... ................................................go put them in the retirement home This kid thinks this is all fun & games, hah, your just prattle* You’d have to get an alias... to vote on your own matches, just for you to win your battles Look at this hoe, trying to act ill, your punches won’t even hit His drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don’t want to hear it Why am I facing you? You’re just a waste of time You’ll never elevate son... ...cuz you already having trouble trying to rhyme Key’d *Prattle means: idle or foolish and irrelevant talk |
metaman has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 09:08 PM.
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this dick is out his zone so now imma handle you quick,
you da best poet? faggot i aint maya angelou bitch,* text cuz you weak cant stand in the same ring or ill end ya, even if yo name was sly you wouldnt be a contender,** you evolved from a poet to the wackest site member, change your name to clef cause imma banish you til november, you picked this fight with me makes me think yo head be a mess, i done cramped you left you bloody cause of yo p-m-s,*** explanations: * - in his sig he has best poet for september ** - sylvester stallone aka sly is the host of the boxing show the contender ***he private messaged me to challenge me (pms = private messages / a girls period where she gets cramps and bleeds) |
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Voted For: Evolution
V/Evolution...he came wit hard hitting punchs also his structure was on point an he had good personals...meta u had a good verse but i seen better from u i felt u came to lightly u need to use more personals in ur punchs....Nohate...RETURN THE FAVOR..... Opener=E closer=E structure=Tie punchs=E personals=E overall=Evolution.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upping.. thank you sir.. somebody plz vote on dis ish..
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fuckin willy...bitch....
uppin this |
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Voted For: metaman
I like this verse alot better it had more better punchlines and better wordplay nice flow aswell I just enjoyed reading this battle more it was a pretty close battle and the other verse wasn't consitant in beating metaman... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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