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One M.B. vs Effect
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30 Lines Max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Challenger: Effect TOPICAL BATTLE: Topic: Lost Soul Good Luck. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-15-05 at 06:09 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 06:10 AM.
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One M.B. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 06:15 AM.
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i'm lost in a city, i don't know where to begin an echo of darkness everywhere tethered with sin 'n i can't move, shit not even steppin an inch 'n everythin sinks quicker every second i think about the lost childhood i wasn't livin before i'm scared, i'm begginin to fall slippin towards the shards of a life shattered as if life mattered i'm drawn like magnets down a time passage a light flashes white so bright my eye's battered it's like my minds static tried to fight back 'n i lie 'n die saggin, with the wieght a my thoughts cradled 'n wrought with the pain 'n distraught stainin the floors with the blood of my soul crimson rainbows, nothin that a love can resolve i'm stuck in a hole, drownin in the sorrow of sin don't know when today ends and tomorrow begins... I just don't fit in, anywhere….. I can't be confined I wander through the wallowing wonders of my indifference of mind My soul's a small chemical reaction lost in my brain My movement's restricted from the frost of my veins Sometimes it feels that I'm dead even though I survive Like a need to wrenched with a knife to know I'm alive Ambition obliterates small steps to my dreams Cognition incenerates my pleas to be free My heart continues to beat but I'm fractured and scattered A confluence of force housed in a rendition of matter I cry tears that don't drop, move in a vague definition Blank thoughts keep on slipping while the cursor is blinking... |
the future in my life seems like a blur and struggle nothing seems to get better just gets more in trouble suffered from pains misory ive had to deal with the lies the denies constantly askin myself why and try not to cry im to weak to get up because im always so tired then I go to work and find out my boss wants me fired waking up every morning not knowing if im dead or alive gettin myself so high on life i don't know how I survive but i try to get by but my soul seems to have lost control and I just can't hold no more there seems to be big hole thats not giving me a reason really to live here anymore im lost and can never be found don't know whats in store analizing about things that are just about to happen theres no place for me to hide everything is trapping rapping is my therapy why are all my friends my enemys I feel so hopeless you've drained all away my energy everybody wants to turn on you trying to burn you tired of being ignored a worthless guy with an atitude you make me feel anxious that im invisable to see you lower my self esteem and always have to dissagree thinkin that im differen't to everyone else around here my senses bring me fear scared away from my pears im now in tears and I can't find a single little reason I guess you really destroyed me from all the teasin I tried to stop believin but it all got way to much ive never felt so hurt things have been way to rough but i still manage to pull myself away from this stuff and finally came to a conclusion enough is enough but still I feel like that everyone has taken advantage and don't really care about what they've caused n damaged |
Voted For: Effect
i feel effect won this deep with alota emotion good rhymes good flow nice structre its one of them things that can change moods and thats why u got my vote best line----rapping is my therapy why are all my friends my enemys I feel so hopeless you've drained all away my energy |
Voted For: One M.B.
ccccccccccccccchhhhereeeeeeeecking polls and uppin |
ummm telll strobe to take my shit offf
and Xceels shit off becuase i saw them PMing eachother then right after he votes for him wierd |
u saw us pming eachother how the fuck did us pming eachother and no we didnt
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ohh thats what it is... I checked a battle.. n X-CELL was just "returnin the favor"..
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why the hell did you vote without feedback? |
it was a mistake... he was trying to check the polls by dropping using the "feedback" button, but accidently clicked on vote.
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upping for votes..................................
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upping for votes..................................
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