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Creativitie vs AssAsInS-eVolve!
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10-20 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting i feel kinda bad battling him but i havent battled topical for a while so im kinda rusty TOPIC=drugs Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 03-17-05 at 07:20 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
dun wrry bout it man. tis only practice so i dun give a fuk if i loose
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AssAsInS-eVolve! has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 08:42 AM.
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In the stomach n in da heart is where da knives go
gotta watch ya back, dudes running from da five 0 Drug dealers coming back n fourth patrolling steets holding heat to leave ya body limp, cold n weak Shots to explode ya legs n have ya calfless tis down to these bastards who like dudes wit no organs...heartless Ready to bite fools, hanging at high-schools wit rifles They wave gats to have ya layed flat when christ-calls Too many cats are influenced...they all got thug fever Hear a couple a tracks then they wanna be a drug-dealer... These drugs n shit be giving off heat like heat-grills All these imports of cocaine crushed wit E-pills Its a lifestyle of smuggling, but you might make it rich but its like a crackhead coz u gotta be prepared 2 take a hit... Even if ya hate this shit...dudes got circumstances n at da end of da day i guess thats their worst advantage... Ima keep dropping topicals till u thugs are mad I aint no preacher but listen 2 shady coz drug are bad |
aight well im bout to check in and start wrting my shit
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Creativitie has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 02:36 AM.
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Dear god, Why do they make those commercials promoting drugs as the truth? Like the famous crack head said “take 1 hit, what do you got to loose” Seriously can drugs honestly hurt you or bring you virtue and bliss? Well don’t ask me I have never took the risk like all the other kids I admit I was never rich or had shit but I would still pursue my life When my mom was dope she said she could see my life threw her eyes She said “just commit suicide, you don’t have the choice of do or die It was the drugs talking so everything she said I knew where lies Still I was dumb as they come, the 1st time I tried weed I was stunned They saw the smoke go into my lungs they came but I was too high to run I was only 13 and already my life was heavy and just about over While I was sitting in my sell I knew damn well I would always be sober So from that day on I turned to god, he was the only prescription I pray that you listen, so that one day you to can shake that addiction This was done fast, just something real quick, its all true yo, word is bond |
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uppin............................................. ....cmon i'll RTF
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Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!
Ima give it to evolves coz I was feeling his verse more...U both had tite verse dnt get me wrong, i just favour his personally. I felt it flowed a bit better as well. return da favour man. peace |
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Voted For: Creativitie
Creativitie took this one with more imagation, better wordplay, rhyming, and better structure. I was feelin yo verse more. Yo drop was flawless to me. I think you came out stronger, hit tha topic well, and stayed consistent thruout tha whole verse. thats why i gave u da vote. assasin-yo verse was wack to me. I felt like you mad this a one sided battle. I think yo verse was way too simple minded, and I think you couldve came a lil bit harder and more creative. Yo structure was a lil off in most places. Yo wordplay was just ight to me, but i still dont think you took this one. overall-creatiitie for me, w/ better wordplay, and imagition, and all that other shit i said. v/creativitie |
03-18-05, 09:01 AM Report Bad Post #10
AssAsInS-eVolve! New to RV AssAsInS-eVolve!'s Avatar Posts: 81 Joined: Feb 2005 From: !!!!!! Status: Online Text Record: 1-4 Audio Record: 0-0 Graphics Record: 0-0 IP: CD98 49E3 uppin............................................. ....cmon i'll RTF Reply With Quote AssAsInS-eVolve! View Public Profile Send a private message to AssAsInS-eVolve! Find More Posts by AssAsInS-eVolve! Add AssAsInS-eVolve! to Your Buddy List Old 03-18-05, 09:52 AM Report Bad Post #11 blackwell Middle Weight blackwell's Avatar Posts: 473 Joined: Mar 2004 Status: Offline Text Record: 11-18 Audio Record: 0-0 Graphics Record: 0-0 IP: CD98 49E3 Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve! sad ^^^this kid voted for his self. look at the IP's. yo verse was THAT wack, and u didnt even explain it. RV is sad. |
This was feedback posted for Creativitie
checkin tha polls........you got him on this one. simple
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