I M Bak
 

Oi Im Bak
Straight Out Out Of South
Southland Boi Coming
Want Beef Or Sumting
Stop Fronting
Leave U Laying With The Plants
Muterfuker U Bak Chating Agin
Only L;ast Week I Merked Your Friend
Strreet Loyal I M From South Land Soil
Dont Take South For A Fool
Cause Im Slewing U
I Jus Go Straight Though U
U Acting Like Im New To The Game
Blood I Put The Frame To Nthe Game
Every Since I M Come Along The Game Changed
People Say Names Get Meked And Have There Face Put In A Picture Frame



Spme 1 Tell Me How To Put A Lionk On This

this was not really a good piece u need serious elevation but u can get betta not hating just sum friendly advice...structure was off...voacb needs elevation...work on ur wordplay...& keep writing & eventually u'll get 2 ur potential fo sho it was 5/10
make sure 2 return the favor in my battle: both lyrics were weak but i thought mine was betta
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