AssAsInS-eVolve! vs SpeatsBeats
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-17-05 at 05:44 PM

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SpeatsBeats has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 05:46 PM.

Considare this a movie,im the good,your the ennemie
Like always,the good wins and then everybody's happy
The monster had been created on april 27 1988*
its why March 14th is the date,this is your last day
I didnt use a beat for this,i closed my eyes for this**
You so none important,youd be featured last in a generic
I saw some battles from this dude,battlin him is almost rude
Dont battle me if your wack,stick with your wack ass crew***
Murder Mook would murder himself knowing you know him*
U wished as christmas gift a pac full of good lyrics
The only one evolve in assassin's death would be me bitch

AssAsInS-eVolve! has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 12:00 PM.

I'll singe this child..coz his skills r like bodies being dumped in da river coz when it cums 2 wackness his "In denial"(in da nile)
I "knock-ya", dude aint a rapper his n "imposter"...
his profile says his a fighter..shit injecting canine genes in ya body only way you'll be a "boxer"!!!!
Rhymes? he bites all...claims he fights brawls
Hows he a gangster?? kids still at high-school
Thought he could win...shit I played him
Needs god ta save him!!...coz this battles like his school years coz ill fucking "Degrade-(de-grade) him"

Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!

this verse was alot better more hard hitting punchlines and alot better structure the other verse fell off a little it was consistant enough to win on punchlines this verse was the better one...

u jokin about the structure right? lol............

Voted For: SpeatsBeats

speats won this not a very good battle but his shit actually made sense punches were ight rhymes were okay structre was pretty good good flow too wordplay was ight

best line---I saw some battles from this dude,battlin him is almost rude
Dont battle me if your wack,stick with your wack ass crew***

please return the favor in my battle link in my sig

thx i guess...........................................

Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!

wow, i think you guys need only one word........ELEVATION, not to be harsh or anything, but this was really bad

structure....speats, you had a decent one, but your flow sucked ass cause your wordplay was garbage, gotta get more creative with your shit, none of your punches hit, seemed like they were all fillers, sorry, you had the right idea for personals, but your vocab and wordplay was poorly done, and you just couldnt connect them, sorry man, but you gotta elevate.....you did have good structure, so play off that....dont worry, only way to go is up....word

assassin, your structure...where was it, and your lines were huge, then small, then huge again, dont do that.....it flowed decent, but work on structure, alot.....im giving you this vote because you had punches that landed, they were stretched and worded poorly, but you had the only effective ones.....but you still need to elevate alot

v/assassins evolve.....no hating here, this was honest....rtf if you could with an honest explained vote

This was feedback posted for SpeatsBeats
 

SpeatsBeats
Considare this a movie,im the good,your the ennemie
Like always,the good wins and then everybody's happy/ WEAK OPENER
The monster had been created on april 27 1988*
its why March 14th is the date,this is your last day/ mmmmm?
I didnt use a beat for this,i closed my eyes for this**
You so none important,youd be featured last in a generic/?
I saw some battles from this dude,battlin him is almost rude
Dont battle me if your wack,stick with your wack ass crew***
Murder Mook would murder himself knowing you know him*
U wished as christmas gift a pac full of good lyrics
The only one evolve in assassin's death would be me bitch/Weak Closure

Speats-no punches at opponent
weak rhymes
good structure, but no elevation
work on elevatin homie n u b iight

Voted For: SpeatsBeats

this wuz a weak ass battle fo both of u guys. SpeatsBeats, not all of your shit seemed 2 ryme. n u didnt have much fo punches.

AssAsInS-eVolve! ur structure wuz fucked up man. u had alot of stretched lines.

flow: SpeatsBeats. structure: SpeatsBeats

no hate AssAsInS-eVolve!, but SpeatsBeats took this one. both o fu guys need a lil elevating.

iight thanks......................................

Voted For: AssAsInS-eVolve!

aight

Ae-Ya structure was fucked up but had some nice shit ya 2nd bar was pretty nice and last bar liked

Sb-You were striahgt forward and lame I could predict wut u was guna say wit out readin ya verse mayne come more creative but good battle

overal-Ae

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