Stay Strong... NEW JOINT...
 

Yo something i played around with.. Looking for some Honest Feedback...


Song Name: Stay Strong

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/wordmanmusic.htm




http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2024122

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2024138

Come back to the forum when you can act more maturely and follow the rules

upppin.... for some feed back on this one

aiight ill d/l now an lets battle real quick you down?..ill set it up.....

Uppin for some damn Feed!!!!!!!!

beat is kinda...lame lol
intro is hella long too
sounds like u reading when u spit kinda, quality is ehhh, flow is average i guess, work on delevery fo sho
voice is... ehhh
chorus was interesting, but didnt match the beat

ok... well then....heres tha truth with no hate

Beat is kinda gay...
flow was ok.. pretty good but fell in places
voice makes me wanna jump out a window...
a destinys child chorus? wtf?
overall 5/10

work on energy to... u sound bland like your just reading even tho u may not be reading... be more powerful... mic presence is ok but needs work....

all 100% honesty and no hate