now u no
 

now u no and i no and we both no, that we belong togetha
and yea i no dat it's a lil foggy but gurl we been through worse weatha
but u so sweet u like a sucka or some cottn candy
so come on ova to my crib gurl and u can meet my family
and my feelins is to deep juss to say dat i like you
cause u no i caint wait for da day where i say dat i do
cause i do,ne thing to see u happy and not see u stressed
cause the path we takin now im startin to think dat im blessed
wit ya blessins and the rest of the lessons is still to arrive
so give me a holla i pick u up at eight and ill be yo ride
cause i been waitin for yo kind,since like da day of my birth
then all sudden its like u decended from heaven and down to da earth
and we can talk all night and discuss ya fantysy's,dreams,and wat ya studyin to b
but whe ya friends sit thurr sayin they caught me i swear,dat it wasnt even me
cause wat they sayin they saw aint the truth dat u see,
cause i no u no da game,when love is about pain
and its a shame,cause i got love in my veins
and my brain,it's goin crazy its insane
cause how i love to do to u its how i love to do da same
and wat we both b doin,we b doin it to our selves
so juss throw it away,or juss put it on da shelves
and forget the past,and the shove it all behind
cause when it comes to thought u da person on my mind

ey yall come on give me some fed back

It was iight structure was not that good flow was decent work on your vocab throw some multies in their but you can elevate right 6/10

btw repay the favor on my 2 o.m.'s links in sig one of them is a girl song to tell me how it sounds!

5/10 [period] , ,,,, !

ey yall thanx for da feed i appreciate yall bein honest u no,and no
doubt u no imma check out yo shit tony....i holla

ey yall come on leave some freestyle