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LexiKon vs Deh me$$iah
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 03-19-05 at 10:39 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
LexiKon has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 10:46 PM.
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Deh Me$$iah has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-14-05 10:46 PM.
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:nono: yo hood is da nigga ya bitch chu//
i spit sick shyt if i want regular shyt i spit you// i roca black bandana...da banana clips will split you// u still a lil man i beat up niggaz das 6'2''// :shoot: commin @ chu man widda tommy gun...nigga im psycho// fuck you nigga dis ain no typo// run up in yo buildin...fuck how u feelin maka nigga do tight ropes// u talkin all dis false shyt i thought u was true B// loud moufin Hood dis and dat as if u knew me// now u got a gun ta ta chest screamin and beggin "DONT SHOOT ME!!"// soon as i pull da triga back...u began ta sweat// as ugly as Sam Cassell is how fucked up dis can get// taka look @ cho pants and i can see you pissn wet// u start ta git nervouse and hands start ta shake// knowin ya face gon be on da next milk carton they make// now u beggin and pleadin about cha mistakes// ya heart's been goin fo too long its time ta apply da breaks// i squeeze da steal in mah hand in yo chest where it land// u laid da fuck out in somebody's section 8// it's time ta skeet skeet skeet b4 da cops hit da scene// i see ya guts hangiin out cuz da OX hit cha spleen// i got back ta mah crib...walked in lookin fo a place ta stash da gun// shyt i had ta sneak past mah son// i dont need him ta see daddy covered in blood// dont need him being like me becommin a thug// ta relax mah mind i had mah bitch on her knees// i ain want da cat...kus in between where she bleed// :thefinger |
First of all i wana let ya'll know him and me used to battle on another site so we got background!!!
{Intro}
...you finally stopped duckin and put it all on the line...
...how does it feel knowin i could smash your carear all in one rhyme...
Verses i spit leave you wortheless as shit you trembel as your rhearsin your script
You winnin this battle is unheard of like a pimp reimbursin' his bitch
Despite your name even jews wont vote for Deh Me$$iah
I "shine" in this battle he wouldn't "glitter" if he renamed himself "Mariah"
Talkin about glocks on the internet thinkin its outside the box
You must be gullable enough to buy a hundred Enron stocks*
If you knew his past like I do you'd know his fake Me$$iah got mad when he heard wasn't a American Idol Candidate
Next time you start something you can't finish
Make sure your opponent can be diminished |
commin @ chu man widda tommy gun...nigga im psycho//
fuck you nigga dis ain no typo// run up in yo buildin...fuck how u feelin maka nigga do tight ropes// u talkin all dis false shyt i thought u was true B// loud moufin Hood dis and dat as if u knew me// now u got a gun ta ta chest screamin and beggin "DONT SHOOT ME!!"// soon as i pull da triga back...u began ta sweat// as ugly as Sam Cassell is how fucked up dis can get// taka look @ cho pants and i can see you pissn wet// u start ta git nervouse and hands start ta shake// knowin ya face gon be on da next milk carton they make// now u beggin and pleadin about cha mistakes// ya heart's been goin fo too long its time ta apply da breaks// i squeeze da steal in mah hand in yo chest where it land// u laid da fuck out in somebody's section 8// it's time ta skeet skeet skeet b4 da cops hit da scene// i see ya guts hangiin out cuz da OX hit cha spleen// i got back ta mah crib...walked in lookin fo a place ta stash da gun// shyt i had ta sneak past mah son// i dont need him ta see daddy covered in blood// dont need him being like me becommin a thug// ta relax mah mind i had mah bitch on her knees// i ain want da cat...kus in between where she bleed// |
yo hood is da nigga ya bitch chu//
i spit sick shyt if i want regular shyt i spit you// i roca black bandana...da banana clips will split you// u still a lil man i beat up niggaz das 6'2''// commin @ chu man widda tommy gun...nigga im psycho// fuck you nigga dis ain no typo// run up in yo buildin...fuck how u feelin maka nigga do tight ropes// u talkin all dis false shyt i thought u was true B// loud moufin Hood dis and dat as if u knew me// now u got a gun ta ta chest screamin and beggin "DONT SHOOT ME!!"// soon as i pull da triga back...u began ta sweat// as ugly as Sam Cassell is how fucked up dis can get// taka look @ cho pants and i can see you pissn wet// u start ta git nervouse and hands start ta shake// knowin ya face gon be on da next milk carton they make// now u beggin and pleadin about cha mistakes// ya heart's been goin fo too long its time ta apply da breaks// i squeeze da steal in mah hand in yo chest where it land// u laid da fuck out in somebody's section 8// it's time ta skeet skeet skeet b4 da cops hit da scene// i see ya guts hangiin out cuz da OX hit cha spleen// i got back ta mah crib...walked in lookin fo a place ta stash da gun// shyt i had ta sneak past mah son// i dont need him ta see daddy covered in blood// dont need him being like me becommin a thug// ta relax mah mind i had mah bitch on her knees// i ain want da cat...kus in between where she bleed// |
Voted For: LexiKon
Lex got this win handz down dat wuz ano contest structure, punchez, an metas all g2 lex, messiah yo structure game wuz fuuuuuuucked up playa, sort dat shit out b4 u battle i culdnt even reads yo rhymes mayne Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: LexiKon
Lexikon, you had a nice verse...was good, honestly... great structure.. good wordplay...vocab had sum hard hitting punchlines in it..ur flow was on point & u stayed consistent thru out this battle..so it'z not bad at all Epical, lame verse here.. Opener was not the best, & the was kinda played.. seen shit like it before... rhyme wasn't consistent punches really wasn't really hittin'..& structure it betta so it can b alot more original.. Ya closer didn't start off nice... I think you could have had a more complex verse with better and more personals, and nice punches throughout if u elevate & practice more on ur wordplay... Overall, Lexikon takes this with more complexity and better and harder hittin personals...Deh Messiah it was an ok verse, just coulda had more personals, and coulda came wit more complex shit, so my vote goes to.. V/Lexikon make sure 2 return the favor |
thanks for the votes A_M_H the favor has been returned and not cuz you voted on my battle but cuz you really did win yeah folks upin this honest votes get the rtf
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This was feedback posted for LexiKon
Checkin Polls..................Good shit Lexikon....u need to roll wit my crew.......~1~
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............upin this battle dont sleep on this............
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.............upin this battle c'mon i know i NOKed this faggot out............ |
What the &^%*%*%#*^%&%$#^#()())( is goin people vote upin this *&^$^#*&^(^$^$##&%*&( :cussing:
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What the &^%*%*%#*^%&%$#^#()())( is goin people vote upin this *&^$^#*&^(^$^$##&%*&( :cussing:
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