The Deepest Deceit (REMARQABL/HAZY COLLAB)
 

DAGYRL (wifey)

HAZY (mistress)


At first sight, so many things attracted me to you..
Theres few who distract, and make me act, the way you do..
I would lose myself in you and my heart would be right..
lets start this right..now.. I need you part of my life..
It was then our two spirits entirely entertwined..
and I never did anything without you in mind..
My sense of direction, i let you control me..
console me, and hold me, and more so, help mold me..
impregnated with your essence, we loved undisturbed..
i'd unearthed, a life of relish...Until there was her..

The first time sweet as the last i saw you walkin past~
Holdin wifey close to your side...the laws of marriage i never abide~
Slipped you..tipped you...stole a glance....right then would come my chance~She left her heart in your hands....trusting knowing you were her mans....with a ring guiding her finger....her feelings for that second you let linger.....It only took just one look.....yo uknew you had been hooked..
..with the gleam in my eye....i knew i could steal you all i had to do was try...
I slipped my seducing traits into your mind..
..from that moment on i knew you were mine

I didnt want my suspicions to actually be true..
i never thought such conditions could actually lead to..
betrayal..one glimpse would just slay-all my trust..
and you say all is fine..but i saw through the lust..
and i smelled cheap perfume when he'd creep in the room..
me asleep, dreamt of gloom..I only wanted to keep my groom..
In my arms, but the harms of your cheating made me blind..
In my mind, I knew my entire life you'd defined..
So what could i do? The only thing i ever knew..
had looked away from my eyes for a quick view of you..

one image is all your seeing...to my bed is where hes fleeing
with diamonds as my bathwater....daddy's lil princess but im not his daughter
hard to manage the timings just right...sneak from your warmth in the midst of night when he's wispering your name attached to sweet words bolding..
..in his mind you kno its me hes holding
decieve you?..leave you?...im trying..baiting the hook of lust and you kno hes biting
sweet splurges of romantic chances...elighten emotions as through my veins the chocalate of seductoin dances

I was so good to him, when each day was done..
Id give myself to him in more ways than one..
Obeyed his every wish and treated him like a king
yet he greeted me with this sting of cheating me like nothing-
ever happened between us, we go back too far..
for some stranger to run up and ruin everything we are..
We connected at the soul, the mind and heart..
he'd finish my sentence before i'd even start..
we faced anything together, prepared for extremes..
we were on the same page, we shared the same dreams..
Id of put myself on the line, resign..If need be..
In his heart he must know that im him and hes me..

workin my magic voodoo charms to dissapear her from your aching arms lips locked sealed your marriages weakend fate...
opened teh cherubs to shoot through the pearly gates
savaged his body for my low self worht..my huger for lust my desire for his thirst.....
lookin at his saddened wife i see shes not the first..
..her tears fall and the blood runs colder...for the love of one man i took away her crying shoulder..
....in my hands i hold her soul to reshape n 'mold her'..
..sorry stricken thoughts taint my view as i see her breath rise n fall...
to the saddest harmony of this tragic song.....
in her clouded eyes i see her wondering what it is she did wrong........

His cheating and fleeting, it was only phase one..
She came on so quick, i was there since day one..
I made him who he was, yet he never looked back..
Now he dont appreciate me, shoulda never took that..
But im not his wife, nor she his mistress, tho it may seem...
I am the underground and she is the main-stream..
Him? He's the emcee who got signed and repealed boots..
for bling suits, dropped all recruits and forgot his real roots..
Now '"he's" happy with "her", No longer does he love me..
but at least when he did, it wasnt for the money..
Our relationship was real, based on passion for the doin..
It was "her" who led him out and sent him packin for the ruin..

Deeper then Atlantis Lady
 

I don't have enuff time to sing the praises of this piece of art.And I'm not impressed often.Damn girl from the visuals to the reality of the situation its very complex yet easy to identify with.Nice shot Lady.....:)

daanm.. i feelin' it.. nice drop ladiez...

keep droppin' the creative shit for sho...

-peace!!

yea tight peice













that gurl hazy really came good huh

wink wink

lmao nah but if we not gonna get good replys then ima give us one

lmao

ill show you all hows its done
first off its like such a shock to me that i got to collab wit teh gurl that hated n wooped my ass for me....( all yall newbies woulndt kno ) but for those who remeber .....yeah how could you forget
anyways enough blabbin

gege 1st verse

My sense of direction, i let you control me..
console me, and hold me, and more so, help
mold me..

wonderful essence of what the man meant to you...the man that bitch hazy stole muahahahahahaah

gege verse 2


and i smelled cheap perfume when he'd creep
in the room..
me asleep, dreamt of gloom..I only wanted to
keep my groom..

that perfume was 96 dollars an ounce biotch ....lol...now but htis added to teh characters showin the tru scheme of what was going on but in a subtle way....like teh wifey knew what was happenin but kept it on teh down low yano?

gege 3rd verse
ever happened between us, we go back too
far..
for some stranger to run up and ruin
everything we are..


damn my fave part of the whole things its like WOW ihazy hit hard and took the man ansd your in teh mood where shock takes over and you realize whats up.....happened to me many a time for sure......

gege FINAL VERSE

you could not have ended it better i dont think you made it all come to a hearfelt end and when you get done reading this of the READER EDOESNT FEEL SORRY FOR YOU......damn they got issues cuz you showin that you strong by moving on but torn apart at what took place
Now '"he's" happy with "her", No longer does
he love me..
but at least when he did, it wasnt for the
money..
Our relationship was real, based on passion
for the doin..
It was "her" who led him out and sent him
packin for the ruin..


AMAZING shit right there......MY HONEST OPINION i have NEVER EVER SEEN A FEMALE WRITE AS WELL AS YOU ....males usualy catch my attention (lol) but females realrey do cuz i write the same stuff as them but you...gege you take this poetry aspect and apply it to your text and it fukkin abducts ppl.....and if the ppl that reply would actually READ TEH DAMN peice theyd realize that this shit happens and that you have a very excellent was of makin it understood over a computer screen......

talent
nonetheless

shaynea terra lee evans

damn dis shyt was hott i should try doing this it would be poppin!!!

favorite lines:
The first time sweet as the last i saw you walkin past~
Holdin wifey close to your side...the laws of marriage i never abide~
Slipped you..tipped you...stole a glance....right then would come my chance~She left her heart in your hands....trusting knowing you were her mans....with a ring guiding her finger....her feelings for that second you let linger.....It only took just one look.....yo uknew you had been hooked..
..with the gleam in my eye....i knew i could steal you all i had to do was try...
I slipped my seducing traits into your mind..
..from that moment on i knew you were mine

ight imma say dat yall was blazin and dis shyt was powerful. keep postin. much luv. peace

UPPIN......why ?..............cuz ima cash in dime for two nickles......if she ever stop dukkin me.....

sorry gege jst trying to get the word out

coughnastyassebonicsaussiecough

it seems like i haven't seen Hazy's name in forever
 

good shyt gyrl i thought you were'nt on here anymore...that's hot

thanks for the reps

^

Dat shyt was tyte yo

About time some hoes on here come with some tight shit.....keep up the good work



Peace.....
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Recognition is due. Nuff respect to you women. I been reading your stuff since the beginning. Thought and time was definately put into this one. You two keep pushing other femcees to new levels. Keep the good isht alive. big luv.

thanks jay means alot coming from you sweety pie........ASIAN sensation eh?.........

and raw deadly watch who you callin hoe ......

this is a real hot peice... go check out mine called the human anatomy

thanks, ^n