A_M_H vs flow verse
 

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flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 08:32 PM.

U MUST BE CRAZY NIGGER
U Sirius – U TALKING nigga?


you make as much sense as a nagging BITCH You like chicken pox- asking to be scratch –ur a fucking ITCH Nigger they should call u rubber the way u on my DICK
U pissin me off- and I don’t like that so I’m gonna shit on u QUICK Better get off ur knees u fagit I’m straight so get off my NUTS callin me a herb – shit nigga u like MOUTH Cause when it opens only stupid shit comes OUT Think before u speak - better yet TYPE Get your facts straight cause the shit u say it even RIGHT* I aint ur dick so don’t fuckin play with me- go bac to playing with URSELF Do the world a favor shut the fuck up and go hang URSELF And the next time – u about to say something STUPID --- STOP—remember that I shited on u and proved u aint gangster just acting what u see in movie SNIPPETS
* was talkin shit how i didn't post a verse in my previous battle when instructions clearly said look up ... don't why i am even doing this battle nigga can't even read

A_M_H has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 09:19 PM.

Get off the kid, or get split, from ya feet down to ya chin
Cuz the kid like "Video Game staffs", i gotta "Lotta Wyns"*

U never been, "Good with texting" like "Cheap cellphone keys"
And only time u gon "Rap sumthin" is when ya "mouth bleed"

"I got this kid beat" i feel like im some kind of "Abusive father"
Was bout 2 take time in my verse, but read urs and said Y bother?

Dawg my lyrics like "Dollars", they the "Main attraction of dudes"
U gon lose, cuz ur verse like "Jazz fans" just "Screamin for Boos" (booze)

Aint mean to be rude, but u lost this battle before u even dropped
Played the role of "Truth Commercials" so this "Phive got stomped"

Get rocked, the glock will spit 8 at this fake,til it break ya whole dome
And AMH treat ya place like Tradin Spaces, straight run in ya home

Im in my zone, u gettin blown, but i aint talkin bout u gettin oral sex
Im talkin bout ya Head poppin off ya shoulders with the Smith and Wes

Leave this fag wrecked, cuz my sick flow just too breezy
And im fiendin for the weed, so i "Torch this Phiv-e"Z

*Wyn, last name of a chinese dude... Video game staffs like all chinese...

Voted For: A_M_H

A_M_H - u had some nice personals...nice punches...and meataphors...and sum multies too...but some punches were kinda weak but it really didnt matter

flow verse - u really have to fix ur fuckin structure...it's way too hard to follow..in addition to havin bad structure, ur punches were wea..nuthin stood out ina good way...also, you rhymed "urself" with "urself" ...that's fuckin wack...elevate ur entire game homie

v/ A_M_H

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ight good lookin' fo sho lyricalflowz & high-dro i appreciate the votes fo sho & the feedback still uppin this 4 more votes i'm looking 4 a ko

This was feedback posted for A_M_H
 

Nice drop Fam

dont seperate ya bars like that tho dogg...
still decent shit tho

Voted For: A_M_H

this verse was alot better more hard hitting punchlines and alot better structure the other verse fell off a little it was consistant enough to win on punchlines this verse was the better one... I was feeling the other verse because of the structue and boring to read...

Voted For: A_M_H

amh iz gon get ma vote cuz\ i culd actually read his verse an his structure game waznt AS fuuuucked up but diz wuz a nice battle, AMH definately gets ,ah vote doh

Voted For: A_M_H

tight battle, but think da throwdest took it easily
punches - da throw
personals - da throw
multis - throw
flow/structure - throw
complexity/creativity - da throw
vocab - da throw

verse wasnt bad raw, but da throw just came out harder and hit harder with punches and personals, his verse was solid....but da throw, it was a little hard to read in a couple places....but overall, pretty solid spit, nice job