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A_M_H 03-16-05 08:32 AM

A_M_H vs phive
 
Battle Rules:

10-20
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No D/R Votes

Only Explained Votes



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-18-05 at 08:32 AM

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System 03-16-05 08:33 AM

A_M_H has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-05 08:33 AM.

A_M_H 03-16-05 08:33 AM

...AMH is in the building fo sho...

listen dickface, i'll Give Phive a taste get a Lighter & Spit Flames son
duke's a bum, & yea my cock's gone, i left it on ur fucking tongue
this bitch is dumb, i'll Split Ya Azz & leave ya Crack Scarred
i've only spit 2 bars, & ya face already Looks Blank like ya Avatar
fuck ya gay ass, the gauge'll blast & leave ya ribcage smashed
get Closed Casked, b like Football Helmets, & get ya Face Masked
u straight trash, i'll leave ya Bars Bent In Half, like a Prison Escape
u gettin' raped, & i don't need 2 use personals, ya personality's fake
Phive, Joe Budden, who the fuck u kiddin', & u makin jokes on me?
i'll hit ya Head, Shouldaz, Knees, Toes, u'll b doing Kid Dances B
this rapper bout 2 catcha slug, he can b the next Bloody Thug Like 50
u punchin' a hole in me? shit son i'll abuse the Sex, Money, Drugs like Whitney
ain't fuckin' wit me, i'm hittin u wit so many Dope Lines, u might O-D
& if u proceed, it'z eazy 2 c, that i'm like a Boss, i run the Jo-B
u'z a scrub homie, i couldn't c P-Rich if i was a Golden State Pro
cuz the only time i could c Phive Like Joe a Millioniare is on a Reality Show

System 03-17-05 11:22 PM

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 11:22 PM.

phive 03-17-05 11:42 PM

~A~
Whats the A in ya name stand for,
where ya take dick in ya ~A~sshole,
i know you got aliases cuz yo a cheatin homie,
cant beat me wit ya lame shit so blow me,
so imma make ya shut ya mouth, hopefully,

~M~
Whats the M in ya name stand for,
just to prove that your a manwhore,
havent battle such a bitch before,
dont fuck wit me g imma true lyricist,
reachin out fo fame imma cut ya wrist,
~H~
whats the H in ya name stand for,
such a bitch, so it cant stand for hardcore,
imma step up and stop ya,
cuz they call me the show stoppa,
lyrics at best aimed toward you,
imma cut off ya blood stream and make ya turn blue,
shut up now bitch cuz youre worn through,

Da_Throwdest 03-19-05 10:27 PM

Voted For: A_M_H

aiight Phive,
your shit was played out. Yo flow was alright not the best. You had some ok punches, nothing special. I was feelin' some of them. Some real nice ones. Your structure was pretty nice too. Just lose the stretched forced bars make it look herbish. But overall a pretty nice verse, man. props 7/10

AMH,
you had a nice verse. Your flow was on in this. Your structure was ok. Closer I loved. tight shit. Yo punches kept on hitting too. Real nice job. 8.5/10

I think this was 1-sided battle. Both of y'all gonna be good in the future so keep practicing. nice job.
but vote/ AMH

gold gem 03-19-05 10:42 PM

Voted For: A_M_H

tight battle, but think amh took it easily
punches - amh
personals - amh
multis - tie
flow/structure - tie
complexity/creativity - amh
vocab - amh

verse wasnt bad AFFINTY, but AMH just came out harder and hit harder with punches and personals, his verse was solid....but AMH, it was a little hard to read in a couple places....but overall, pretty solid spit, nice job

bone_daddy 03-19-05 10:45 PM

Voted For: A_M_H

this battle wasnt reall tight, it was ok.
basically yall both need to up ya punches cuz half of them didnt hit or made sense at all.
structure is fine.
bars r stretched for no reason, especially Phive.
he had better multies tho. Phive had better flow but it could've been better.
but Amh punches hit better between the two of yall in my opinion. the ones that actually made sense hit harder than Phive.

no competition 03-19-05 10:48 PM

Voted For: A_M_H

AMH-i was feelin yo drop more...i think u came harder with tha punches and i even seen a couple of metaphores in there, which had me suprised. u came with more creativity, and originality in yo verse, and thats what made me wunna give u my vote.
Phive-coo name, but i think u lost this one fam. i think u shouldve came just a lil bit harder, then u wouldve had my vote. ur drop was a lil too boring for me to get into to. but i htink u still came hard wit punches, and good wordplay, just up yo vocab a lil fam...NO hate THO...u haad a nice drop...but AMH came harder
overall-keep elevatin yall. this was a close one, but it just gota go to AMH...NO HATE...

Stanza 03-19-05 10:50 PM

Voted For: A_M_H

Aii This IS what it Is Hoe


AMH

You Came Pretty decent ...Hard enough to take this battle ..I Usaulyy Take each bar and explain them detail by deatil But that takes to long ......Basically You Hade some correct punchez and you didnt have a really messed up structure its jus that you Put all Those (-) and all caps in Ya verse Some times and that makes it hard to read Sometimes.....i didnt really have to Fav bar bcuz the verse wasnt that strong but it was strong enough to take this battle on N E DAY !..

Phive

First of all Ima give ya All Props for ...The AMH thang but ya verse was messed up mayne you didnt supply n e decent punchez and thats what messed you up .....i mean no offense i see where you were going with the name play thang that was hot mayne I wouldnve neva thought of it but still if you bring the grill you gotta cook .....which means if you supply the idea then you have to carry out the plan and i fell that you didnt carry out the plan on this battle sorry

My vote goes to

AMH

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