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heat 03-16-05 12:50 PM

heat vs .K.onfliktz
 
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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-16-05 at 01:20 PM

Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in.

System 03-16-05 12:56 PM

heat has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-05 12:56 PM.

System 03-16-05 01:03 PM

.K.onfliktz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-05 01:03 PM.

K.ontroverz.Y 03-16-05 01:24 PM

Total "Meltdown"


Fuck Heat, Shootin Bottle rockets at nets only time you Blastin Shots..
...Leave 'em Winded...N' start Blowin Them Whistles Like Traffic Cops..
Get On my Level bitch, I stay On top of this herb like dem afro picks..
Kids Bitchmade, have em "lined back" on defence, but only tackles chicks..
spit-Shit, Ill hit this-bitch, in his Lips-quick, but Sorry fam, it aint Lipstick..
N' have this Vocab Illiterate Fag screamin Like when his "clit Ripped"..
Konfliktz Will Wreck ya "rec" like Ghetto Kids Doin' Community Service..
This kid was send straight from heaven, addin to my rec was his purpose..
But see Heat never spit somethin Flames......You nothin' but Hot Air..
N' I'll make sure this Beatings Longer then his Fuckin Moms Cock hairs..

heat 03-16-05 01:36 PM

u been here a while so time to show u a little bit more of my skills


believe im a,

Scorch This Man, my flow Burns!..Fuck Sticking Wins, I’ll Nail nerves!!
Then Consult Ya Fam bout Thier Loss Cuz kon suceeded to a Failure

Ya Know What The Disgrace Is?..You Wouldn’t Win, Even If We Swiped Spaces!
So Lets Say It, ‘Signifying Hood Drug Dealers Is The Only Way kon-Verse Is In High Places’

He’s An Actress!..kon script is.. him Done Wit His Head In The Matress!
So, The Mags Will…Have kon Ooz-In…Aahs! Like The First Sighting Of Something Attractive!

Attack The Panel Of His Mind Wit Aurora Barrage..I Hope You Can Catch This Light!!
Won’t Refer To ‘Fams History’ As I Jab Tree Limbs Thru Ya Point Of Being a Branch of Life
so just,
Face-It-Kid u’d Have Better Chance Matching style, Just by Tracing Shit!!
Cuz Battle Tactics Known To Dismantle kon-Treads Quicker Than Athiests

good luck

The Militant 03-16-05 02:16 PM

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

konfliktz won this battle crazy wordplay rhymes were tight metas were okay work on them a lil structre was good flow was nice too

best line-Konfliktz Will Wreck ya "rec" like Ghetto Kids Doin' Community Service..
This kid was send straight from heaven, addin to my rec was his purpose..

7/10
hit me up later we should do a collab

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Dirty Nigga 03-16-05 07:27 PM

This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz
 
lol...
nice shit Kon...

thwe afro picks an takle chicks line was sick...

uppin this

LyricalMa$tamind 03-16-05 07:48 PM

Voted For: heat

heat
u been here a while so time to show u a little bit more of my skills


believe im a,

Scorch This Man, my flow Burns!..Fuck Sticking Wins, I’ll Nail nerves!!
Then Consult Ya Fam bout Thier Loss Cuz kon suceeded to a Failure

Ya Know What The Disgrace Is?..You Wouldn’t Win, Even If We Swiped Spaces!
So Lets Say It, ‘Signifying Hood Drug Dealers Is The Only Way kon-Verse Is In High Places’

He’s An Actress!..kon script is.. him Done Wit His Head In The Matress!
So, The Mags Will…Have kon Ooz-In…Aahs! Like The First Sighting Of Something Attractive!

Attack The Panel Of His Mind Wit Aurora Barrage..I Hope You Can Catch This Light!!
Won’t Refer To ‘Fams History’ As I Jab Tree Limbs Thru Ya Point Of Being a Branch of Life
so just,
Face-It-Kid u’d Have Better Chance Matching style, Just by Tracing Shit!!
Cuz Battle Tactics Known To Dismantle kon-Treads Quicker Than Athiests

good luck

VERY VERY NIce
liked all the words u used 2 try n murk ur opponent
great elevation and nice punches
work on structure doe
u tried 2 squeeze sum rhymes in at times but overall u ripped it up
9/10

K.onfliktz
Fuck Heat, Shootin Bottle rockets at nets only time you Blastin Shots..
...Leave 'em Winded...N' start Blowin Them Whistles Like Traffic Cops..
Get On my Level bitch, I stay On top of this herb like dem afro picks..
Kids Bitchmade, have em "lined back" on defence, but only tackles chicks..
spit-Shit, Ill hit this-bitch, in his Lips-quick, but Sorry fam, it aint Lipstick..
N' have this Vocab Illiterate Fag screamin Like when his "clit Ripped"..
Konfliktz Will Wreck ya "rec" like Ghetto Kids Doin' Community Service..
This kid was send straight from heaven, addin to my rec was his purpose..
But see Heat never spit somethin Flames......You nothin' but Hot Air..
N' I'll make sure this Beatings Longer then his Fuckin Moms Cock hairs..

like da hard punches at opponent
good structure
nice rhymes
made the whole think flo
a little more elevation u b real nice
8/10

my v/Heat

A_M_H 03-16-05 08:00 PM

This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz
 
this was a hot azz verse dawg u won this battle & would have won my vote if i could vote on this joint

K.ontroverz.Y 03-16-05 09:07 PM

sa'' good fam..this dude gettin his fuckin herb ass friends to vote for him now...

Jason 03-16-05 10:17 PM

Voted For: .K.onfliktz


K
Punches Nice, Personals Alirght You Had Some Decent Vocabulary In Here Man, Pretty Good Structure You've Improved On That Nice Going Son, Over ALl Punches Was Alright

Heat
Good Verse Punches Alright Personals Cool, Wordplay I Wasn't Feeling It Much, Your Vocab Was Worthless Man Just Basic Ish Nothing Good, But Eh You Had Some Good Punches Man

Vote-Kon

No Hate Honest Vote

Meta4 03-16-05 10:23 PM

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

hands down \\

Heat: your first bar did'nt even rhyme and I juss coould'nt feel your rhymes and ya punches were mediocre

K: yo had an aight verse i've seen betta from you but it wuz more than enough to beat Heat

both emcees keep ya heads up

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M-Eazy 03-17-05 12:32 PM

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

i think kon took this one. better punches and wordplay, and he came harder wit vocab. u took this one way easy. one sided battle to me
heat-yo structure was fucked up, and yo verse didnt flow well. i wasnt feelin yo verse, but it was ight. just kon it/./

v/kon

TAKENOTICE 03-17-05 01:01 PM

Voted For: heat

KON


Fuck Heat, Shootin Bottle rockets at nets only time you Blastin Shots..
...Leave 'em Winded...N' start Blowin Them Whistles Like Traffic Cops..

Wordplay was there but the punch was soso…

Get On my Level bitch, I stay On top of this herb like dem afro picks..
Kids Bitchmade, have em "lined back" on defence, but only tackles chicks..

Again wordplay punch was aight…

spit-Shit, Ill hit this-bitch, in his Lips-quick, but Sorry fam, it aint Lipstick..
N' have this Vocab Illiterate Fag screamin Like when his "clit Ripped"..

I was feelin this one with the sorry fam it ain’t lipstick I dunno it just worked…

Konfliktz Will Wreck ya "rec" like Ghetto Kids Doin' Community Service..
This kid was send straight from heaven, addin to my rec was his purpose..

First part of the bar nice wordplay the second part sortah made the bar seem off…

But see Heat never spit somethin Flames......You nothin' but Hot Air..
N' I'll make sure this Beatings Longer then his Fuckin Moms Cock hairs.

Decent closer you strongest hit in my opinion….

Okay verse it was really soso I clicked on your battle expectin you to come harder then
This kon it seems you played soft instead of bringin you’re A game which everyone knows
You have…





HEAT


Scorch This Man, my flow Burns!..Fuck Sticking Wins, I’ll Nail nerves!!
Then Consult Ya Fam bout Thier Loss Cuz kon suceeded to a Failure

Play off your name aight punch…

Ya Know What The Disgrace Is?..You Wouldn’t Win, Even If We Swiped Spaces!
So Lets Say It, ‘Signifying Hood Drug Dealers Is The Only Way kon-Verse Is In High Places’

I was really feeling the wordplay on the second part of the bar…this was a strong bar…

He’s An Actress!..kon script is.. him Done Wit His Head In The Matress!
So, The Mags Will…Have kon Ooz-In…Aahs! Like The First Sighting Of Something Attractive!

The ooz and ahha that was classic the first half of the bar not so good …

Attack The Panel Of His Mind Wit Aurora Barrage..I Hope You Can Catch This Light!!
Won’t Refer To ‘Fams History’ As I Jab Tree Limbs Thru Ya Point Of Being a Branch of Life
so just,

Aight bar seemed like it was slightly stretched out…

Face-It-Kid u’d Have Better Chance Matching style, Just by Tracing Shit!!
Cuz Battle Tactics Known To Dismantle kon-Treads Quicker Than Athiests

I expected you closer to be stronger then this but decent…

Heat your verse came together for me a bit better then kon’s did and i have to give you my vote here.

ethiks 03-17-05 06:17 PM

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

[FONT=Tahoma]kon:
aight verse. you had some good structure, and good flow. liptstick line just killed em. it dont really matter you didnt use any personals, you didnt need them....and i guess you knew that. your punches were ok, nothin to special, but better then his.

heat:
your verse was half ass. i dont have much to say bout your verse, but the lines are streched......you had maybe
one decent punch. and your lines were way to stretched. but keep elevating.

v/kon


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