hate race
 

so much hate race takes place, i don't no were to begin,
everybody gets judged,for there race,
wat they wear,n most importantly their religion,
it's all wrong n only we can put it right,
if my dreams wud come true, all this hate race, wud stop 2nite,
but my dreams don't come true, its just a fantasy,
the violence is everywhere, welcome to our reality,
one question tho, why hate others, for the colour of their skin?
its a fact,we all no, we're the same within,

this is just da start,pls tell me if its ok so far :thumbup:

kinda simple, tha structure at tha beginnin wuz fucked up tho. 6/10

i liked it. good vocab.