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Stanza 03-17-05 06:45 PM

Stanza vs heat
 
Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Unexplained votes

All Favors will be returned



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-18-05 at 12:45 AM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

System 03-17-05 06:50 PM

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 06:50 PM.

System 03-17-05 06:56 PM

heat has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 06:56 PM.

Stanza 03-17-05 07:13 PM

I laugh at ur lame attempts 2 try make me look stupid
cut open ya chest n bare ya heart like bein naked wit cupid

Yo moms call me up just to feel my bone..
She could sit her pussy on a beach so her crabs feel at home

Your Sensin so Serious, But ur Text is Delirious
U stay On dicks like bitches who have sex on their periods

Hurt Yo Left Eye wit Dis Lyrical Content Burnin House Mc Lik U
Yo Shit Was Neva Sick, Ppl Like Tim Mcgraw Might Bite U


* Yawn *

Dis verbal castration,will leave U jacked Like masturbation
only time U was off the meter is when U left the 'cab waiting


~Stanza~


Dont Bitch Out

heat 03-17-05 07:23 PM

You A Dick Ryder So Ya Fans-Suck, Chop Ya Arms Off And Toss-Ya-Hands-Up
You Straight Bitch How You Gonna Man-Up, With Flow Thats Older Then A 89 Nissan Stanza


Dude I Smash Wacks, And " Verbally Abuse The Beat" Cause I Can "Handle Tracks"
While You Stay "Soft Round The Heat" Like "Candle Wax"


Now Handle That.. And So You "Know Your Number 2" I Put A "Pencil To Ya Head"
Cause This "Kid Unprepaired For Stiches" He's "RUNNIN OUT OF THE THREAD!!"


Try All Youre Might, Youre LightWeight Your Not Gonna Thrive, Verses Get Toppled Wit Knives
And With All His Vulnerability To Punchez.. Who HASN'T HIT YA?.. Like Prostitute Wives



good luck


With ya trashed raps it was obviously expected you'd be Clapped Back, Marinate ya Skull and Boil it! buryed under a soiled ditch..
cuz even at a 'far distance' you can smell that Cologne/Alone's Contents comes from De Toillete..
( eau de toillete )

Stanza 03-17-05 08:59 PM

Aaaa We is uppin for some votes yall Lets get this thang Crackalatin

Lemme Get my first win On This Site

TuNiT 03-18-05 05:42 AM

Voted For: heat

DIZ WUZ HORRIBLE YALL BOTH POSTED VERSES SEPERATING BARSN U FUCKIN HOMOS

But heat winz diz battle HANDS DOIWN, loved yo verse even if yo structure gamne wuz FUCKED UP

heat win =z dis his verse had more creativity an a few dope multies

weeeeeeerd

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heat 03-18-05 12:43 PM

upp'in for more vote please
and thanks for voting tunit

ThaEViLGeNiUs GL 03-18-05 04:17 PM

Voted For: Stanza

damn u str8 murked dat nigga...ya shit flowed betta, betta structure...betta meta's, u got dis 1 easily nigga

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ThaEViLGeNiUs GL 03-18-05 04:18 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by TuNiT
Voted For: heat

DIZ WUZ HORRIBLE YALL BOTH POSTED VERSES SEPERATING BARSN U FUCKIN HOMOS

But heat winz diz battle HANDS DOIWN, loved yo verse even if yo structure gamne wuz FUCKED UP

heat win =z dis his verse had more creativity an a few dope multies

weeeeeeerd




is u retarded nigga??? his shit was whack mayn

heat 03-19-05 02:51 PM

^^^ i think u on my dick u weak fuck how about i battle u

~Tony Green~ 03-19-05 02:59 PM

This was feedback posted for heat
 
HAHA and you said you pre-write all your shit haha retire from rapping you suck!

Stanza 03-19-05 10:01 PM

Aye can We get some real Fuckin votes in hear all yall fuckin nonvotin newbs STAY THE FUCK OUT OF MY BATTLE ......

A_M_H 03-19-05 10:57 PM

Voted For: Stanza

Good battle here......

Stanza, you had madd personals, with some metaphors, and good wording for your words. YOu had decent vocabulary, and you had good flow, and structure was on point. Good Drop man.

Heat, You fell off in this battle man & u shouldn't stretch ur lines. You came half assed I think, because you were missing the nice presonals, and the creative Metaphors. You still managed to do alright, but not enough to be credited the win in this battle. No Hate

V/ Stanza

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Stanza 03-19-05 11:09 PM

Thanx Mayne


We Uppin for more votes remember All These votes are beiing returned


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