Suicide
 

it's too hot in here i need to breathe
too much stress i need to relieve
the world keeps spinning as my life ends
and i try to mesh with the crowds different blends
my heart keeps bleeding but i JUST WON'T DIE
and every night i pray to god a heartfelt cry

thoughts of my homecoming flash though my mind
as i blackout and suddenly become blind
pills taking an affect on me
and now a painful life of pain and sorrow is all i see

will i be missed? naw, i doubt it
i told them i was gonna do it. i screamed and shouted
but they act as though i'm crazy
when in fact they were just too lazy
too lazy to take the time to understand where i'm coming from
WHAT? u think i'm dumb
no time to answer that
as a matter of fact
i'm leaving!i'm out! this world isn't so tough
i just had enough
it's time to get away
cant stay here another day

take a last breath
and say hello to death

NO SLEEPING!
 

Re: Suicide
 

u had a nice beginning .. it pulled me right 2 the topic

those middle linez had mad emotion in them, just like i can feel ur pain

and the endin waz just askin for the verse from hell .. nice drop

this was tight, nice emotion put out, nice rhymes and nice feeling with it, peace


signed,
~madd

I hate this topic :( but im sure everyone can
relate to a certain degree even me!

Keep spittin da realness ...

Props

~1~

my gurl this is on point!


a lil different topic~~

dont worry be happy~<<< the quote for the day

where is all this drama coming from?? from the situation between me and ya boi!!!! dont sweat out lil drama!!

the cat is just "nesha-deprived" and he blames me for it!!!

he cant have you anymore and cant fatham the thought!!

you need to just go ahead and blow him off the edge by messin wit me!! even though i know your current situation!!

yo cherry dis was ill.. do you battle? cuz ya rhyme scheme is nice and you'd be a worthy challenger ta defeat.... im me at Lyricalvision