LyricalMa$tamind vs Tak- Ova
 

Battle Rules:

16 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No dick ridein
House Rules
1 verse a piece

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-20-05 at 08:44 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

LyricalMa$tamind has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 08:53 PM.

You moved wrong today, you fucked up slack herb...
Now you ain't a step ahead, more like steppin backwards.
I attack words using wit, you know I do it right...
S'why be4 u spit ...u be praying for ya life.
Now ya wanna fight? Ungrateful bitch, where's gratitude?
Considering you couldn't win in a battle until I tutored you!
Bitch takes my knowledge, try and bring about my doom...
Even if I sent ya to college...
This'd still be more of a mismatch than Seal and Heidi Klum.
Occupation says Roadhouse, I'll leave you on respirators...
Forever close the mouth of this Patrick Swayze impersonater
I spit shit dat be lyrically fit
im battlin a newb.. i smoke ya shit like its a blunt i hit
yo talk shit n act up wit a shell n ya dome
FBI lookin 4 clues like dey Sherlock Holmes
I flirt like a stingray
da 12 gage leave niggaz outta work like Martin Lutha King Day
Im lettn dis nigga spit in 20 lines
but he jus got murked quik/cuz he a waste of my time

hurry up and spit dawg
u proly pussy out man come da hell on shiatt

post ur shit damn
stop bein scared
jus post

Tak- Ova has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-05 11:23 PM.

u switch from soft to hard like taco shells i got more shells than taco bell//murder dudes 4 a liven when i spit catch on the street da gun spit out da clips//nigga u aint heard Tak- Ova dat nigga stay wit da 45 4+5 carry the nine all the time switch up da flow like jay i dont write no rymes//im new to this shit but i know 4 a fact i killed u spitten dis shit//nigga next time come correct cause niggas dyin triggers pullin ur moms layin out on da street in her blood is pourin//i'll lay u six feet under ima get da gun betta run cause the bullets burn in u dont want them to hit ya//when it comes to spitten ur gurl a lryical masta mind damn she fine//gave me dome kiss u in the same day im da reason y she cut u in changed her ways//u got evreybody sayin Tak-Ova did it again i didnt even come wit my a-game in im still goin to win//looks like i got dis one i dont even want to see ur rhyme cause when i call bitches out i always shyne//

uppin............................................. ..

come on yall we need sum votes

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

structure-lyrical
metaz-lyrical
flow-tak-ova


i was feelin lyricals verse more, it was a lil more sophisticated

vote yall come on we need some more votes for dis battle and Tha king ccan u elaborate more please

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

LyricalMa$tamind:
man no hate but i think you didnt try here iv'e seen so much better from you...you didnt have any good vocab here it lacked creativty a bit there was a few good metaphores but nothin' so creative you know i just felt it lacked that..but you did have a good stucutre and flow thats good...no hate man

Tak-Ova
that was ok man but you need elevation in your vocab was not betta then L.M. and your stucture and flow is needs work now..the creativty and metas were not there didn't c ne of imagery there was very ight verse from you i shoulda been looking alot more cause your gettin better...damn good job...

opener: L.M.
closer: L.M.
metas: L.M.
Imagery: L.M.
flow: L.M.
stucture: Tak-Ova
creativty: L.M.
win/ LyricalMa$tamind
make sure 2 return the favor

uppin 4 sum votes yall
we had a good battle come on

come on yall vote
yall vote
elaborate da battle and vote pleaseeeeeee

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

hmm. this battle was mad wack. both structures were way off in this one. But i think LM took this one. He made a harder attempt at decent punches, and mettas.
Takova-work on yo structure. It was completely off. Couldnt really see any good punches, or anything because of it.
LM-also work on yo structure. It was completely off. It was better than Takova's was tho.
overall-wack battle, but LM took this one wit harder attempts at punches.


you need 300 to RTF in my battle link in sig. If you have that, RTF plz. on yo alias or w/e if you have one.


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