MetEoR-K vs EmIn3m
 

Battle Rules:

8 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-21-05 at 11:37 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

EmIn3m has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-05 11:43 PM.

Fake fuck ain't straight kid....yo, he seems to be gay
Cause he stuffs himself with beef just to be MetEoR-K
Leave ya beaten today....best believe I'll pound ya face
Thinking he's intergalactic.....too bad he's just outta space
Leaving ya down, disgraced.....who the fuck think this geek is big?
We all know how much you envy me.....'specially when we peep ya sig
The shit is deep, ya dig?.....fucking jerk, I'm stabbin ya eyes
Had to make his name that way just so the MERK can capitolize
Killing spree had to start with you......family's grieving with no hug
It's like I'm giving up cocaine......the way I'm leaving ya skull drug

MetEoR-K has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-19-05 12:06 AM.

Shady wannabe, this is the real aftermath
We done with wankstas, aint nothin after that
Go call Dre and tell him to produce another hit
As long as it aint a song about your mothers shit
As close as you come to the 'dirty dozen' is STDs
While I'm up in the club with all the MVPs
Your my toy soldier about to get put back on the shelf
How you Eminem, when you are black what the hell
So will the real Slim Shady please stand up
For posin' as Em, Dre will stab you like Young Buck

Aiight.....I'm uppin this shit for some votes :hump:

uppin............................................. ................

Voted For: EmIn3m

emin3m
Fake fuck ain't straight kid....yo, he seems to be gay
Cause he stuffs himself with beef just to be MetEoR-K
Leave ya beaten today....best believe I'll pound ya face
Thinking he's intergalactic.....too bad he's just outta space
Leaving ya down, disgraced.....who the fuck think this geek is big?
We all know how much you envy me.....'specially when we peep ya sig
The shit is deep, ya dig?.....fucking jerk, I'm stabbin ya eyes
Had to make his name that way just so the MERK can capitolize
Killing spree had to start with you......family's grieving with no hug
It's like I'm giving up cocaine......the way I'm leaving ya skull drug

liked da punches u threw at him
liked da eminem lines
good structure
tried 2 cram lines doe

8/10

meteor
y wannabe, this is the real aftermath
We done with wankstas, aint nothin after that
Go call Dre and tell him to produce another hit
As long as it aint a song about your mothers shit
As close as you come to the 'dirty dozen' is STDs
While I'm up in the club with all the MVPs
Your my toy soldier about to get put back on the shelf
How you Eminem, when you are black what the hell
So will the real Slim Shady please stand up
For posin' as Em, Dre will stab you like Young Buck

not as many hits on opponent
like structure and nice closure
work on elevatin

7/10

my v/ emin3m
no hate meteor k

ay yall check out my battle against tak ova
holla back it was a tight battle
elaborate and vote 4 betta verse

Voted For: EmIn3m

well, heres what i saw

meteor....your shit was kinda lame, you never really used anything creative against him....kinda just played off his name the whole time, and alot of weak shit was formed...plus you had alot of filler lines, and lines that didn't punch....like....im in the club with all the MVP's or whatever.....no, sorry, plus, i thought you had alot of fake personals...do you know he's black? but thats just me......you had alot of potential for making some lines work, but wordplay and vocab killed you hardcore.......anyways, alot of shit was actually about eminem and dre or whatever, which wasnt pucnhes......so yeah, elevate

eminem...not bad, some stuff was played or weak....but had a few nice lines...and the fact you actually were dissing him....plus you had some good creativity, wordplay was decent......structure was a little blah at times....but overall it wasn't bad

The shit is deep, ya dig?.....fucking jerk, I'm stabbin ya eyes
Had to make his name that way just so the MERK can capitolize
^ good shit right there....haha

v/eminem....for better punches/personals.....more creativity/complexity

This was feedback posted for EmIn3m
 

You seriously suck dude. Why you caslling this dude fake when your tryna make respect of another guys name.

Voted For: MetEoR-K

meteor-k~good opener, i liked all the name personals and the punchlines, they were pretty effective here,nothing was too strong though, you could have came harder in some areas, but all in all, you pretty much sum'd it up with this kid and the eminem disses, i like the dirty dozen,std line, and you rcloser was was good, overall good verse..1
eminem~decent punchlines, but no real personals,so none really hit that hard, i liked how you bought up the MERK in his name, that was the strongest punchline here, in your verse, i thought you as well, could have come harder, but considering meteor-k had just a verse of name disses, i had to give it too him for being consistent with the punches....but pretty decent job both.1

This was feedback posted for EmIn3m
 

lol@your name chekkin tha polls...........................

Voted For: EmIn3m

EmIn3m - Good spit, flow was iight.. and you had some good punches and multi's.

Best Line - The shit is deep, ya dig?.....fucking jerk, I'm stabbin ya eyes
Had to make his name that way just so the MERK can capitolize

Worst Line - Fake fuck ain't straight kid....yo, he seems to be gay
Cause he stuffs himself with beef just to be MetEoR-K

MetEoR-K - Iight spit, flow was hot.. but the punches were weak, did more to diss Eminem.

Best Line - So will the real Slim Shady please stand up
For posin' as Em, Dre will stab you like Young Buck

Worst Line - Shady wannabe, this is the real aftermath
We done with wankstas, aint nothin after that

OVERALL - iight battle, both need work, but Emin3m came harder wit the punches and multi's. Met, try dissin' him next time, and work on your lines.

Vote - EmIn3m

Voted For: MetEoR-K

flow: blah
punches: meteork
personals: meteork
wordplay: blah
metas: blah
multis: blah
enjoyment: Blah

vote: meteork

explanation: came more personal .. and was pretty funny lol .. meteork .. didnt come personal really only had the sig line that stood out which wasnt enough to win .. stay elvating and return the votes plz..!!

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