New track-I Wish
 

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I havn't posted a song in a long time so i'll post one up

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/xx13ampxxmusic.htm

"I Wish"

This track is from Created's mixtape 'Audio Galaxy Vol. 1'

Produced by Narcotic

Order:
First verse-Created
Second verse-13 Amp
Third verse-Created
Hook-Created and samples

Drop some feedback and i'll return the favor

The beat is cool sounding, 1st verse~ nice delivery, i like your voice, some minor production and mixing probs,but who doesnt have em..lol, 2nd verse~wow, nice voice and emotion, your delivery is dope on this track man, 3rd verse~same as before, but this time you have more emotion in your voice too, both had pretty solid lyrics....nice hook too, good overall track..1

nice little song u got here im feelin ya lyrics and ya flow is nice n smooth....unique delivery four clips nice anyways so i didnt expect anything less but nice....good job keep it up

yoo this shit coo as hell like some old summertime shit created off at some times but its still good and amp when I heard your verse first thing that came into my mind was amp should be on every verse lol but created third verse is a little better than his first verse

vocals should be a lil higher in begining, cant really hear him
1st dude flow, a lil off, ok voice, hard to understand a few words, lyrics seem straight
2nd dude betta flow, emotion str8, voice kinda.. ight
lyrics a lil betta
chorus vocals need a lil higher

overall 8/10

holy shit this song is fuckin SICK!!!....


hottest line

13 amp: i cant wish for light..when im blinded by the sun...

thanks for the feed yall, keep it comming

yea..peep ya shit days again amp....you still got the lyrics, along with the emotion and flow....both of yall had nice delivery....overall nice trackk....respect