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I'm Back to Open Mic!!!
Yup, I haven't posted on this form for a while so here is somethin' for yall...
Fertilize emcees take bullets to clear out their system/ Dissed ‘em with a bar just to leave ‘em lost in their rhythm/ Enigma for their puzzle solver, your problem are the two revolvers/ Keep sagin’ my pants, but the belt stay on my hip/ Like body fat on a 500 plus dude, Let shots rush you/ And make you move to Katmandu, while I move with custom shoes/ To kick ass of faggots so fuck them fools/ My rhymes be rusty but I dust them too/ Fall but rise back up like the sun do/ One two one two, any haters in site/ If so I’ll leave ‘em poisonous like venomous bites/ That’s why back in 2000 I stole the pen that Canibus used to right/ I start the battle but you refuse to fight, cause you know the outcome is you losin’ your appetite/ Bullets come up close to u like their magnified/ I ain’t Trick Daddy but I can leave your clothes so wet that kids can slip and slide/ Bystanders get victimized for what they witness from they eyes/ Holla back and let me know how was it...1 |
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it's kool... nice word play... you wanna battle
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i like the flow to this piece
nice multi action goin "Like body fat on a 500 plus dude, Let shots rush you/ And make you move to Katmandu, while I move with custom shoes don't know but i like this line with the katmandu shit must sound dope in audio haven't heard some gangsta shit in a minute overall nice piece just work on them lines that be draggin and you'll be ight 1 |
Good look G, and Huk'd on*FoNiKz* let's battle..1
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this was aiight for tightness un-tight-a-fied... illness in some parts, excellent vocab-er-ish, peace
signed, ~madd |
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I liked the flow to it nice wordplay holla
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set it up son
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.What's Up Kid.
I see you still spit hot shit. Remember me, formerly known as Armaggedon of Masterminds/PVC? We both been out a while, but you still on fire... keep it up dunny. You've got some hot spits.
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