metaman vs premanition
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-21-05 at 05:18 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 05:22 PM.

metaman has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-20-05 05:24 PM.

Metaman? Damn im still waitin on the evidence
No punches inserted so ‘explanations’ are irrelevant
Gud to grab attention, get the reader to engage
Man I literally wish ur shit wud jump up off the page
Yeh I stage the event with true content for descent
In the shadows? Meta’s got a torch in that tent
Yeh you flow like a river, like air from a fan
If the fan included a band round its fuckin fin span
Its o.k, go borrow my verse, use that copy n paste
Cos this over so quik its seems ashame it go to waste

im an authority here i punish kids daily,
he's PRE-MAN so how he gon have da balls to face me?
my lyrics hit hard break you down wit pounds of notes,
you bout to "go down easy" like bud ice down yo throat,
why dis chicken cross da road to get merked in a text battle?
this bitch is a joke his played punchlines aint laughable (lol),
you asked for a battle but i bet yo shits-pre-written,
yo favorite rapper drop a hot line in the last fifteen-minutes? (HA!)
imma send-this bitch home cause imma menace like dennis,
you couldnt send hard shots if dis was a game of tennis!

all punches are pretty obvious pm if you have questions

Voted For: Premanition


Prem
Nice Man Did This Shit This Was Almost One Sided You Cam With Nice Punches, Personals Was Alright Man, Vocabulary Cool, Best Part About This Was Wordplay Dope SHit SOne, Structure Ey! Pretty Good, Matter Of Fact It Was Decent, Nice Job On This One Maybe You'll Battle Me One Day, Lol Just Playing Bro

Metaman
Nice Man Personals Alright, Punches, Should Of Use Something Like Final Destination Shit Ha Ha But Cool, Vocabulary Alright, Structre Was Neat, Nothing Really Else Here, Your Wordplay Ey! You Can Do Better

Vote-Prem
Prem Return The Favor Me Vs .K.onfliktz In My Sig
It's 4-3 I'm Up I'm An Alias By The Way
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Voted For: metaman

vote= metaman
mettas=meta
punches=metta
wordplay=metta
structure=tie

it wasnt that a close battle coz mettaman had a better verse overall. all i can say is work on ya concepts n try to elevate more. Thats 2 both of ya

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Voted For: Premanition

damn, dis wus actually better than i thought it wood be...

premanition-good:loved the opener, liked the vocab, and also liked the wordchoice, you also had little multies in there, good structure, and werdplay...seen better from you thoguh, but your topicals are much better
bad:i didnt really like your closer, it felt played
fav line was the 2nd

metaman-good:liked teh name play, decent opener, the link helped a little
bad:hated the closer, it was played, flow fell off, and wasnt really feelin your verse mang
fav line was the one bout last 15 minutes, that was good, lol

opener:P
closer:M
vocab:P
punches:P
personals:M
werdplay:P
flow:P
structure:P

*i see potential in meta man so keep it up mang*
rtf...link in sig

v/premanition

uppin dis for some votes please

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Voted For: Premanition

lol pre got this from the opener to the end the multies were nice that first punch hit hard enough to knock metas shit off the page [lol]

Metaman? Damn im still waitin on the evidence

^^^^^great opener

meta you really didnt have metas that disapointed me that bud thing killed your verse kinda pointless


v/premanition

return the favor on my battle its been open for way to long :thumbup: honest votes only

uppin to finish this......................................

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