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Hot Sauce vs Khaos_daRenegade
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-22-05 at 10:54 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Hot Sauce has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-05 10:55 AM.
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Khaos_daRenegade has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-05 11:01 AM.
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hot sauce? dawg u could get popped off...
when dem shots tossed, they hit ya and den they leave ya top lost.. and after dat ima roll me up a spliff of trees... if u was r.kelly, and i was a 14yr old bitch u still wouldnt piss on me...* u just a lil young nigga so why do u think u a vet... after i beat u, ima stuff u in some nike's just to keep u in check... i said u wack dawg and i know dat u heard dat... so openin, a chinese restaurant is da only way you'll serve cats... |
Im tryin new str
Im SAUCE the illest killah to make your girl wanna feel ah.. prodigy guru greatest emcee to say SCREW YOU.. godlike gifts got me givin great ~punchlines~// im lyrically ahead of you, like i was the first one in the ~lunch-line~...how do you feel?.... ~FINE~?? this battle is ~ALL~~~~~MINE~!!!!! Cuz ur TIME HAS COME..."this aint a Game" but you TRY TA RUN ,the only way "this is close" is cuz you DICKRIDE FOR FUN* ! my lyrics kinda Phat they needin "LYPO-SUCTION" ,claim u have TIGHT ~PRO-DUCTION~ mabe if it was audio"....Cuz "ur whack lyrics they Gotta GO",cuz mine commin "HARDER YO","eating more shellz than ESCARGO",,Get ya SCARRED WITH ROPE and "soaked with flows" more Than a BAR-OF-SOAP ~! :o got ya SLIPPING and SLIDING,all OVER THE PLACE, GRIPPING AND RIDING, a BONER U TASTE..."a porno with bullets" is the only way i'll "BLOW" a LOAD-ON-UR FACE ... (FINISH) My "HIPNOTICS ABLE" ta have you "DUCK TILL MORNING",as i RIP OFF UR ANKLE, this KID"S SHOT AND MANGLED,cuz my rhymes kill "with more elements" than a PERIODIC TABLE,... "FUCK A WARNING"i should be wearing a "PSYCOTIC LABEL", Khaos GONNA LOSE ...cuz like "too mutch booze" i'll leave ya SICK,so u PASS OUT AND SPEW,.... As a matter of FACT you about to feel the fury of a madman// I print this battle out just so i can throw you in the trash can... ( where your shit belongs) |
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Voted For: Hot Sauce
well, easy vote....but not that great of a battle khoas.....looks like this is one of youre earlier battles, structure was non-existant....no consistency at all, which hurt your flow, and made it less enjoyable to read...you had a few decent punches at the end, but the verse before it killed them....not really much vocab.....wordplay was decent, elevate hot sauce...stick to your regular structure....haha, this was sloppy as hell....but im giving you the vote because you had more hitting punches...had personals in there....some punches had me laughing,....creative wordplay....although, some multies seemed like fillers....flow was aight....but your structure here was blahh... v/hot sauce.....harder punches/personals |
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Voted For: Hot Sauce
aight check this shit hot sauce, u had a nice verse but seriously, work on the structure cuz it is fucked, it is difficult to read and you have to go over it once or twice to see the rhymes. ure lyrics were pretty gud though, some nice punches that had good pwer, u hit him wit the personals and ripped him pretty well. just work on that structure and get a flow goin and u'll go far. 6/10 khaos, ure shit was too basic, u need to elevate ure game son. the flow was on and structure wise u was pretty ill. ure punches though were just too basic, need to get more complex, use better wordplay and shit and hit with harder personals. and that r kelly shit is played like fuck. sorry dawg but a weak drop, u need to elevate son......a lot!!! 4/10 V/ - HOT SAUCE |
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