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dfunk vs Murdz
Battle Rules:
5 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 1 day to check in. Sorry, i'm kinda busy these days. Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 03-24-05 at 12:39 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
dfunk has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-05 12:40 PM.
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Well I didn't set up this properly, but that's what you get when you got no experience with this. The time to respond after checkin' in is 1 day, i'll respond sooner, i just gotta get back to work right now. Hope you can check in earlier than 3 days.
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Murdz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-05 10:34 PM.
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This nigga Murdz one of them online nerds /
RV be his domain, on the net he looks for men tryin' to get laid / A fuckin' closet faggot / Boy George and Elton John magnet / He a little rat with a human head that's designed to snitch / Fuckin faggot postin' gay shit on RV is your habit / Betta drop that or get pierced with a rusty hatchet / Can't fuck with none of my shit stupid, yet alone match it / I'll make a gay midget fuck the shit out of you G / And let your whole family watch it and see / |
…dfunk, ya not a challenge I put ya in a sauna juss to make ya Rhymez Sweat… …Cuz ya juss a thing of the Past and you haven’t even Reached ya Prime Yet… …Faggot im in your area you should watch your back and guard ya life… …Cuz you must live in a ghetto the way your structure's far from nice… …And basically dog like pubs durin prohibition you're a waste of a bar… …Cuz your punches never connected so why should I break em apart… …You figured Murdz would lose? That further proves ya brain is rattled… …Cuz you'll only be up in votes when posting to raise the battle… |
yo aiight verse homie... good luck... upppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnn
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yo now that i read that shit.. damn homie that was wacccccccccckkkkkkkkk
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Uppin this! Murdz a wack ass punk tryin to hate on my noobie ass. I never battled in my life, i never said i was gonna be good. I been into hip-hop last 9 years of my life, but never rapped or battled.
Anyways, uppin this. |
ok no hate homie.. its all good.. i respect ya for that..
uppin this... |
Voted For: Murdz
Firstly can i say that if this was an audio battle it would be a lot closer. Cos dfunk has the ideas but not for a text battle. opener: dfunk's was sorta good but the words were the same at the end of each line so that lost marks. Murdz had nice metaphor about sauna and hard hitting punch. Closer: dfunks was again moe of a street battle freestyle. Murdz had an aight closer but has to remember that battle and rattle is rhymed all the time so wont get anything for originality but still better than your counterpart's. Like i say dfunk had a freestyle street verse, not an RV text verse. The flow was good, structure was off. Punches were alrite, only the Elton John one stuck out really. Best advice i can give is to read some other battles by cats and learn from wat they do. Murdz, top drop from you. Packed wiv good metaphors and hard hitting punches, only thing is maybe some more personals but wiv a kid like this there may not be a lot to rip on. |
Uppin i guess.....................................
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Uppin @ ya niggaz camon vote. I dont give a fuck for who, just vote.
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yaeh comeon vote up nukkaz..... UPPPPPPPINNNNNNNNNNN
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Can anyone fuckin' vote. Camon fellas.............
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