tranz$cript vs dfunk
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 03-22-05 at 02:48 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

dfunk has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-05 02:53 PM.

tranz$cript has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-05 02:55 PM.

imma kill this femcee" like he was julius ceaser....
exept it wont be with knives, itll be wit ether....
my lyrical percision is compared to yer dikk sukkin ability.....
u givin head for crack,homie yer just uppin yer agility....
yer skillz r that of a cocksukin homosexuall............
yer raps r wack too,theyll only ever be textual...
u think yer gettin this shit crunk,but really its all wack...
yer lines r so streached out,its like shaq dropped a track..
but now i gotta be done and go grab me another battle....
u though it would take me a day?man ill be chilin in my castle

i dig graves for those who think they can spit a tight lyric /
meet me up, its like you're nick cannon and i'm esoteric /
my mic like a suicide terrorist, destroyin' everythin' in the 500 ft radius /
i hit you once so you see i'm serious, 2nd hit is when you get delirious/
battlin' you is like seeing a Diplomat fan at a Tribe Quest show /
you can't comprehend or understand the flow /
mothafucka with a IQ so small /
you a bigger poser than that cracka paul wall /
of course you'sa transcript, you was already down in writing /
so better get some new shit, i ain't down with that biting /

Voted For: tranz$cript

dfunk - ur flow and structure were all over the place
radius and delirious don't REALLY rhyme..didnt really have any punches or personals...u gotta diss him, throw some hard punches and shit...and also, like i said, fix up ur structure

tranz$cript - ur flow was decent.. a lil stretched at times, but better than his...at least YOU actually had some punches in there....u had pretty good vocab thrown in there...but i gotta say one thing

do not hate on shaq...shaq is the man...and finally, in his words (aries spears' at least): "KOBE SUCKS".....lol

but anyway:
V/ tranz$cript

lol chea fam uppin on this battle............... kobe owns

For real yo, Shaq is sweet. Fuck Kobe.............

uppin this battle yall honest votes returned.........................

Voted For: tranz$cript

One of the weakest battles i have ever seen so my vote has to go to trans for the simple fact that he knew what a punch was and tried to use one.

DFUNK commit suicide thats how terrible your verse was, Half of it didnt rhyme you threw no punches youre too basic. And you rhyme scheme and structure are hideous.

Not many people say hideous because its so rarely used but your verse definately is worthy of the hideous title.

ELEVATE

both of you.

Voted For: tranz$cript


Tran
Alright Pretty Cool Man, Punches Alright, Personals You Could Work On That But Okay, Vocabulary Nice Man, Pretty Good You From Another Site Ey", Structure You Could Use Help On That As Well Hit Me up If You Need Elevation Man I'll Help You Fo Sho I Helped Lil Cali A Little Not Much Though Any Way Good Job

DFunk
No Punches, No Personals, No Wordplay, No Vocabulary, No Flow, No Multi's No Meta's, Man You Seriously Need Help Bro I'm Down To Help You As Well Man, Structure Was Alright Man But Still NBeeds Work On It

Vote-Trans
RTF Me Vs Jesus Escobar In My Sig Explain it On Both Accounts, Atleast 500 Charactors

Voted For: tranz$cript

yo u had better punchlines and some good vocabulary

uppin this shit to ko this muther fucker cheaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Voted For: tranz$cript

uh shit eh

going with transcripts.....dfunk...your stuff didnt rhyme on many occasion, your structure was horrible, not really any punches...stretched lines, gotta elevate alot, word, learn how to diss

aight, transcriptz, your shit was whack too, homosexual line was your best, but it was only decent, so you need to elevate too...but you get the vote because your shit flowed nicely, structure was decent, actually had punches, few persoonals, overal, one sided, but still pretty whack....no offense or hate, but elevate, lots of room for it,,,,,,sorrry to be so harsh, but yeah, the truth.......

v/transcriptz