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Seven Deuce 03-21-05 03:51 PM

DFunk vs Seven Deuce
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Good Luck :thumbup:
:shoot: :shoot:

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 03-21-05 at 04:21 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

System 03-21-05 03:55 PM

dfunk has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-05 03:55 PM.

dfunk 03-21-05 03:59 PM

I'm a violator you a mothafuckin' hater /
7 Deuce, workin as a dedicated ejaculator /
Only in suburbia, is where cats heard of ya /
You're Beverly Hills most wanted /
In the hood is where you get hunted /
Down like cattle, son you shouldn't have asked for this battle /
I'm Mickey Mantle, you Sosa and you on steriods /
This nigga got a corked mic, this shit can't be serious /
You smell like infected pussy bitch you disqust me /
Whatever made you think you could lyrically surpass me?

System 03-21-05 03:59 PM

Seven Deuce has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-21-05 03:59 PM.

Seven Deuce 03-21-05 04:02 PM

DFunk,Look

You Remind Me Of A Toilet Yo , Cus Ya Lines Are Shit
I Can't Hear Shit Ya Saying Like D.O.C. Spitting A Lyric
Reforming This Kid, Have Him Shaking Like Girls Asses
Ya Lines Is Still Fucked Up Like Bush Collecting Taxes
Fracture This Kid's Skull, Now It's Going Both Ways.....
Just Like His Sister, I See In This Kid Like X-Rays.......
Accept This Challenge And Ya Record Will Be Damaged
Ya Name Prooves Ya Whack, You'll Never Be Established
I Put Dot's For My Closer Kid, Cus Your Ass Is Finished
................................Consider This Battle Diminished

Seven Deuce 03-22-05 01:38 AM

Upping This Shit One More Again Cus.........................................

Seven Deuce 03-22-05 04:15 AM

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dfunk 03-22-05 02:21 PM

Uppin this. Let's see some response. Win or lose, who cares.

Seven Deuce 03-22-05 04:41 PM

Upping This Shit Again..........................................

dfunk 03-23-05 12:08 PM

Damn, we gotta be wack as fuck. Nobody voting haha.

Orion. 03-23-05 12:43 PM

This was feedback posted for Seven Deuce
 
ayo to sum it all up, seven deuce got this...he had some decent punches and a few metas...dfunk you had some lines....but they had no substance fam...now that i said something about the verses, i have to tell you guys how to elevate, dfunk, go read some tutorials, the lines in there are probably inspiring, recommend O.M.Bs. multi one...Seven deuce just keep doing what your doing bro....anyways...

V/Seven deuce

ayo both of you return the favor in the siggy yo, all honestly only brothas...aiight pz...

Seven Deuce 03-23-05 04:38 PM

Upping This Bish Nigga.............................................

dfunk 03-25-05 02:50 PM

Uppin this. Show love .................................

dfunk 03-26-05 12:38 AM

This was a wack battle for me, but camon show some input. I dont care bout winning or losing i just wanna improve.


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