12 bar freestyle
 

my first acapella freestyle leave some feed and don't come in here with all that homosexuality shit

the link is in my signature 1st one called 12 bar freestyle

can i get some tips on a freestyle god!!

you need to control your breathing and try to flow more, you know find you a pattern and stick to and sound like you mean what you say cuz you could have the illest lyrics on the planet without the proper delivery it still gonna be whack

ok thanks i was toled that earlier i need to work on my flow and keep the same level of emotion through out a verse

^^did you leave feed on anyone elses tracks?

yea on a couple tracks,why'd you ask that?

becaus that ususally explains why noone gets feedback. Hit those people back and ask em to return some feedback here so you pick up some momentum. Uno.

thanks for the tip im about to fix the freestyle so i can get some more positive feedback