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tranz$cript 03-23-05 01:00 AM

free style
 
chea bout to get hit wit sum fantastic shit......
spit a verse faster than tony green sucks dick....
your third person shitz played,get a new trend...
yer a twelve yer old kid,riding j flopz dikk till tha end...
and this aint even shit,u think yer verses r dope....
but if u failed to read tha feed yer raps r all a joke...
exept mabe if ya collabed wit my boi buck......
and thats still his verse making u look tough....
u think everyone loves u,but its only tha dot.........
and thats only becuz u swallow his cum shotz....
anyway im done i aint wasting no more on tony........
fukk you tony green get jdots ballz out ya mouth homie....... :thefinger .

tranz$cript 03-23-05 01:22 AM

uppin this shit yall

Cinema 03-23-05 01:24 AM

man this is supposed to be a audio track not text lol

∆ P E X X 03-23-05 01:24 AM

go away. A: that was wack, B: this is for audios. C: that was wack

..Decree.. 03-23-05 02:46 AM

eh flow was off quality is horrid lyrics were eww now this beat damn its ILL though got that silent sound....;)

Mentor 03-24-05 11:25 PM

haha i have ta laugh at this yo give the kid a break though he told me what happened he was just high when he did this so just cut him some slack aight??

Kirk 03-25-05 12:40 AM

not good enough to be comin at Jdot.. no hate

M-Eazy 03-25-05 02:33 AM

All jokes aside. J DOT is smiling right now. :)

And you know why?

Cause I got people that are willing to embarrass themselves, and give themselves a bad to name, just to type the letters. J.D.O.T. in their wack ass drop. Ain't no excused for coming off this weak. I'ma give you a hand of advice though. Re-Read your verse, SLOWLY, and tell us if it's really dope or not? Your structure was wack, and your flow was off. Your punches....*wait, where were they*...(nevermind that then). Your personals were shit. Your mettaphores were absent like senior ditch day at high schools. This was the most horrible drop I ever read. And I Second, Third, Fourth, Five....etc. OSB's ^ Reply. "This is TOO way to be coming at J DOT".

M-Eazy 03-25-05 02:34 AM

Oh, and BTW. Buck Shot is weak too. Don't fool yourself. How you gonna be led by someone wack?

lil S 04-13-05 11:23 PM

that shit was worse than mine and my shit bad i'll admit it ive been doin this for 2 months and how long have you been doin this

Sweft 04-13-05 11:36 PM

nice shit son! keep it up!

Sweft


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