the kid 523 vs ::..:$lobK::..:
 

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Check in by: 03-26-05 at 07:30 PM

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the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-23-05 08:36 PM.

My rhymes are so sharp they'll go right threw you
Your 7 and 1, bitch you still cant get a crew, your pitiful.

You to rap is like hitler fucking jews, my shit stings so bad ill make your body bruise, your sure to lose.
Why does it take you three days to respond, whats wrong .w your fucking head
You really need that much time to copy someones thread?
Imma kill this nigga, and spit him out like corn on the cob
I thought you could do better but your just a fucking slob

::..:$lobK::..: has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-25-05 04:48 PM.

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

$lobK you easily took this with your opening line.
And consider me a bad foster parent the way I'll beat the kid.
^^^^clever as hell 8/10
Cause right now your skills is equivalent to your battle rec.
^^^ Haha had me rolling 7/10
those was really the top 2 lines I liked you killed this your verse gets a 7/10

Kid 523
you need to elevate I mean no one even wants to really read your verse if the opening bar doesn't even rhyme.
But I read it wasn't nothing to special but you get a 5/10. Elevate homie for real
No hate v/$lobK

btw please repay the favor!

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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

Iight You Didn't Need Much To Beat This Kid But You Did Come Weak Im Not Gonna Lie,You Had Some Multies In The First Bar The Second Bar Was Kinda Whack That Punch Wasn't That Great Third Bar Was Ok But You Said The Same Shit Basically In It Battle Rep And Battle Rep Means The Same Thing Almost The Last Two Lines Were Self Glorifying The Punch Was Ok

Overall ::..:$lobK::..: Took This Because He Had A Better Verse And His Verse Wasn't Stretched

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

word...easy to decide here....

kid....coming out hard this time, you're improving alot, but your concepts are still really basic, and you gotta get a good idea of a punch...keep things consistent, keep dissin him all the way through, dont really talk bout one thing, then go off talkin bout eating corn on the cob.....also, you need to work on structure, had a mega stretched line in there....but you actually improved alot since before, but still have plenty of room to eleavte

slobk....dont know why you keep battlin these newbs, but whatever, you easily took this, for harder punches, and more of them connceted....strcuture wasnt consistent though, start of it seemed forced....still can elevate....word, one sided

v/slobk

I Aint Battlin Newbies..They Challenge Me..And I Aint Gon Back Down..HellNaw..Lol

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hahahah, yeah, well i can relate....this guy challenged me to :laugh:

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This was feedback posted for the kid 523
 

yo lobk quit texting noobs mayne.. ur verse was wack also but i didnt want to vote, QUIT PMING AND AIMIN PPL FOR VOTES PLZ... THNX U

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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

flow-slob
punches-by far slob
metaphors-by far slob
kids flow was iight i liked urh first lline but wat slob wrote made things sounds so mean on urh part