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tranz$cript 03-23-05 11:27 PM

noks crumbling freestyle
 
ahahahaha yer bois r leavin ya j,wut tha fukk u gonna do now :thefinger
i never though i would meet a pussy like you....
thats until i stumbled upon yer so called crew....
your soldierz r runnin,how u gonna win now dogg?...
quite tryin to offend me,yer shit is all wrong....
You think because u got posts, so that means your dope…
Man I think yer wack, and u cut your own throat……
But no I won’t boast, I think its funny how u quote….
What I said to your bitch ass, after every single post….
youll never make a dime,from selling your rymes....
first floor already crushed you three or four times...
you tryin to talk right,get tha dick out ya mouth....
hey any one see tony green?, "naw hes out"....
nokz fallin apart,man it couda been tight......
escobar u should leave and find a crew thats right....
cause aint no one ever gonna look at nok......
u got more beef than 50,exept he got dimonds to rock...
first u lost buck,then u lost tony.....
and fuck tha rest of you,exept high droz my homie....
escobar u ok too,but fuck jdot and tha rest of his crew...
i cant believe i wasted this freestyle on you........
ill be waiting for nok to collapse you fuckin fruit....
i cant wait to see your reply,u gonna blast me j?...
talkin bout guns,its only water u spray.........



hahahahahahahahahahahaha :thefinger :thefinger

tranz$cript 03-23-05 11:33 PM

upppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Mentor 03-23-05 11:43 PM

it's aight a lil basic but some decent punchlines and good structure it flowed easily..6.5/10

tranz$cript 03-23-05 11:46 PM

uppin yallllllll first floor bitch cheaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

tranz$cript 03-24-05 12:06 AM

com on yall chekk it..............

M-Eazy 03-24-05 12:21 AM

Hood, plz dont lie to him. This drop was beyond simple. Not just cause you TRIED to clap at me, but because this was just wack. Real Talk. U really need to elevate dawg. I dont think First Floor is helping you do that. Even yo leader is wack w/ a wack record.

but i wont get into that. 2.1/10 for me

tranz$cript 03-24-05 12:33 AM

jdot yer wack fukk outta my thread bitch

The Militant 03-24-05 03:16 AM

i actually liked this fam this was an ight piece nice rhymes punche lines were good too keep up the good work dawg...7/10

Harley Quinn 03-24-05 03:24 AM

okay this really was a very basic spit. if u want to elevate u need to get off the rap cat hat bat rat type lines. like.."nigga u wack, ill break your back"
i think u have some potential, but work on it though. I give this spit a 4/10

peace

heat 03-24-05 07:27 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by tranz$cript
jdot yer wack fukk outta my thread bitch



j dot would merk u hands down no comp there
everyone in nok would merk u

Murdah.txt 03-24-05 03:19 PM

too bad i merked u already bitch ahahahahaha

Orion. 03-24-05 03:26 PM

your gay...lol...man your FUCKING WACK!!

heat 03-24-05 04:22 PM

casper done merk who?


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