Harley Spits
 

My first official drop on RV.

sorry ive been hella busy.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182749


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183314


10 bars of fun

please dont take nothing I say here to the head...im not aiming it at anybody.

these bitches and niggas hatin I guess im the appointed hag
im the type to smother all these dumb hoes with a poison rag
arsenic, ether, chloraphorm, and im not even a violent bitch ;)
i know yall niggas wanna be IN just like that verizon chick
chi-town reppin, they call me Harleen last name Quinzelle
see me droppin all of yall like calls on sprint cells
got much in common with cappadonna, cause u know I slang editorial
niggas battle me, they faced with more el's than spanish tutorials (L's)
got ya runnin scared, afraid to take a loss to anyone in my gender
yall played lines have been in more bars than relapsed AA members
thinkin im some cutsie girl, nigga ive earned stripes with spits
everytime i battle males, all yall can come with is dykes and dick
come with original, nobody wanna read about you E-thuggin it!
basic rhymes from mcdonalds like..pa da pa pa pa...im lovin it!
im livin the life, attracted by the allure, the way jay personified it
been observin the way yall herbin, unnervin, just walk on by like isaac
females can get it also, talking all that yak, bitch im quick to dead it
attention hungry, come online to raise ya self esteem dam, how pathetic
just watch ms. harley work, sit back, relax and have yourself a molson ice
so i think im done here, my breif introduction into the world of open mic

shout out to jimmy pockets, lady fiya, drama queen and payday.

holla @ ya girl!

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niggas be sleepin

got much in common with cappadonna, cause u know I slang editorial
niggas battle me, they faced with more el's than spanish tutorials (L's)
got ya runnin scared, afraid to take a loss to anyone in my gender
yall played lines have been in more bars than relapsed AA members

^Loving those lines, actually made me laugh

This was cool drop girl, stayed quite consistent with good punches, nice wordplay and just a perfect example of how to brag and boast in a humorous sort of way. Vocab was nice and I was definately feeling your flow. Just keep it up girl, I know you got more in you than just one quick drop like this. But I enjoyed reading this, flow made it easy to follow and you had some dope shit in there.

Keep going!

DQ

DQ check out my OM.

^Yes sir if you give this girl some feed!

DQ

thanks for the feedback.

uppin^^

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come on now

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thats a dam shame.

yeah ma good drop feelin everything nice flow even keep it up ma yo holla on aim or msn

damn u got some skills nice flow good structre rhymes were insanesome of the best ive seen honestly good shit 8.5/10

please return the favor in one of my open mics links in my sig

come stop by the crew rap jaudderneutz u in if u wanna join

yo..u did really good for ur first open mic...7/10 u good enough ta join our crew ma...damn we need a girl in our fam.

thank you thank you

thanks for the feedback. im touched :thumbup: