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LaSt ChAnCe vs Fatal Lyricist
3 bars due sometime today good luck
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LaSt ChAnCe has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-24-05 03:38 PM.
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Fatal Lyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-24-05 03:39 PM.
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iight check
This catz like wet paper itz easy to rip em.... Afta dis battle i'll have his record lookin like systems... I see your hyped cuz its ya first day, merk u in da worst way... Here take dis loss, lets pretend todays ya birthday..... Letz be serious lemme put on ma game face........ And dis newb 1 LastChance as his name states..... holla bak, good luck homie sumtin quik wuteva 1 |
last line shood have gonn like dis- And Give dis newb 1 LastChance as his name states.........sorry haha 1
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GooD LuCk
Dude Been weak Since before birth Like Women In pernatal .... and after this Battle Not even ' Funeral Homes ' WIll 'Favor Fatal'|| . .You Better hope you come in First cuz you have no chnce wit Last .... and Jus 'Picture your Insides' Cuz Your heads up your Ass|| . .Work For Nasa and this could still couldnt pop off like a rocket .... Stick your Bones In Wall Plug's Jus to 'Pop Your Shoulder outta Socket'|| |
GooD LuCk
Dude Been weak Since before birth Like Women In pernatal .... and after this Battle Not even ' Funeral Homes ' WIll 'Favor Fatal'|| . . .You Better hope you come in First cuz you have no chnce wit Last .... and Jus 'Picture your Insides' Cuz Your heads up your Ass|| . . .Work For Nasa and this could still couldnt pop off like a rocket .... Stick your Bones In Wall Plug's Jus to 'Pop Your Shoulder outta Socket'|| |
uppin fo votes na mean holla bak 1
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yo Nice shit fatal sorry for the double post i misunderstood the posting methods LoL
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Voted For: Fatal Lyricist
jeah ghost took this on... yo his punches just hit harder simple as that..... the first line was killa lastchance you need a little fore effort the structure was easy.....the flow was irrelevant so the punchlines was the most inportant... vote ghost |
Voted For: LaSt ChAnCe
Flow: Blah Punches: Tied Personals: Tied Wordplay: Last Chance Metas: Last Chance Multis: Neitehr Enjoyment: Both Vote: Last Chance Explanation: Both came decent some good concepts in there just thought last chance edged it because of his wordplay .. yall should rematch........ stay elevating .. stay up .. 1 |
Voted For: Fatal Lyricist
I voted for ghost clearly because of wordplay. Ya'll both had good punches in this one, but I gave my voet to ghost because he worded his punches wayy better. last chance, you had some good punches, but you worded em wayy off. you were on the right path tho, but I think you should work on that. ghost, work on creativeness. Both structures were on point, and they flowed well, and the verse looked clean. both had good rhyming. my vote goes to ghost though. I already said why. RTF. link in sig, and plz make it explained. and if you dont explain, i wont be voting on yall battles no more. ~1~ |
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oh, you cant. damn. I waisted my time. I dont think you can vote on either one of em. damn. CHeck tha post vote allowed tho on tha j rin one. but i think both of em 200 post. oh well, good battle...at least post feedback |
Voted For: LaSt ChAnCe
LaSt ChAnCe .You Better hope you come in First cuz you have no chnce wit Last .... and Jus 'Picture your Insides' Cuz Your heads up your Ass|| Vs Ghost Nothing... ...LaSt ChAnCe took this one, just came plain harder in this battle, had harder punches, & a good flow here, & Ghost I see text'n is not your thing, so you might as well stick to graphix, no hate though... |
Voted For: Fatal Lyricist
Ghost: This catz like wet paper itz easy to rip em.... Afta dis battle i'll have his record lookin like systems... ^^opener was nasty i was laughin on dat 1 for a minute I see your hyped cuz its ya first day, merk u in da worst way... Here take dis loss, lets pretend todays ya birthday..... ^^ good multi and once again tha finisher on this bar was sick Letz be serious lemme put on ma game face........ And dis newb 1 LastChance as his name states..... ^^didn't really get tha closer but tha rest was hot Last Chance: Dude Been weak Since before birth Like Women In pernatal .... and after this Battle Not even ' Funeral Homes ' WIll 'Favor Fatal'|| ^^kinda played and didn't even rhyme . . .You Better hope you come in First cuz you have no chnce wit Last .... and Jus 'Picture your Insides' Cuz Your heads up your Ass|| ^^lmao......best line of tha whole battle . . .Work For Nasa and this could still couldnt pop off like a rocket .... Stick your Bones In Wall Plug's Jus to 'Pop Your Shoulder outta Socket'|| ^^ wtf?...dont get it at all multies go 2 ghost wordplay goes to last chance structure....ghost by far ghost owned tha punches and overall originality goes 2 ghost winner......Ghost |
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