The Black Plague vs final
 

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The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-24-05 07:13 PM.

I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials*
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you**
If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”***
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat



*While back Wendy's did commercials, and that old lady says "wheres the beef"
**Masochists are people who like to hurt themselves
***Siggy says "final- you can't pass me"

final has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-25-05 11:36 AM.

plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good

Voted For: final

pretty easy battle to call

Black Plague, honestly i thought ure verse was weak and thats it. ure opener was decent and then u fell off through the rest of the verse. i mean ure constantly talkin about ass and farts, u need to stop that shit yo. and ure rhymin was basic, couple of weak multies and the personals were not gud either, they mainly callin him a fart and tlkin about ass again. overall really weak from u, i expected better - 4/10

final, ure shit was not much better, clearly neither of u was tryin in this battle. ure rhymin was basic to but at least u didnt spend all ure time tlkin about ass. personals were better, nice opener and i liked the play off of his crew initials. next bar was pretty gud, i liked the I'M WACK shit!!!! gay shit is played, but the musical chairs line got me laughin so u got away wit dat. the closer was aight, cud've been better but overall ure verse was better. - 6/10

overall both was weak, i mean both came consistent, final was consistent with his punches, all fairly average, and black plague was just consistent in tlkin about ass. that is why i think final took this battle hands down.

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Voted For: The Black Plague

The Black Plague......
I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials*
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you**
ehh decent opener...4/10

If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
lol..i laughed when i read this...8/10 for humor

Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
ehh decent...4/10

You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”***
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat
liked the set up...punch was ok....5/10

overall........21/40

Final.........
plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
decent personal here...5/10

hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
nice punch here...6/10

and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
decent.....5/10

and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good
ehh again decent..i think you could have came with a stronger closing...4/10

overall....20/40

this was a good battle...but i believe plague got it...the humor in that one punch is what go it for him in my opinion...honestly this battle could go either way...i think final stayed more consistent with his verse...plague you didnt come as dope as a couple of the battles ive seen you in before...but i believe its still enough to get you this win...but like i said...this will prolly be a 4-5 battle...no telling who will win...i give it to plague for humor factore...about even structure...wordplay - there wasnt a whole lot from either one...punches from both sides were good...final may have came with the more consistent punches...but the one or 2 of plagues edged finals best in my opinion...plague please RTF in my battle against Flow Intelligent.....thanks...

This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
 

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This was feedback posted for final
 

final took this one in my category. i dont know if i can vote on this or not. i might be blacklisted

oops. I meant to click vote.
well, i'll go get that changed. I voted for final, becuase I felt you came harder in personals that turned into good diss punches and mettas. you verse was nice. structure was a lil on and off, and flow was also, but overall, i was feelin yo verse. i think you should work on consistency. you need just a lil bit harder punches in ur next one. yo opener was nice. good wordplay, and vocab, and i think you took this one.
TBP-yo had a nice verse, but to be honest, i wasnt feeling it. i think yo tried to come too hard, n tried too hard to make us feel what wasnt there. yo gota meat us half wit tha punches if you dont meet us at all. ur vocab was igt, just a lil rusty. if masochistic means that you like yo hurt YOURSELF, then why would he be asking for you to hurt him? shit didnt land right. i think you were on the right page wit that, you just found a brick wall, and tried to barge thru it, but it didnt work. elevate on that. ur structure was on point, til near tha end, it started to lack. i think you wouldve easily had took this battle if you wouldnt have had those minor fuck ups effect you.
overall-not a close battle to me. i had to give this to final, cause i was feelin his drop way more....


v/final

i'll get that feedback switched

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Uppin... Been gone for a while so havn't seen the battle...

And i'll RTF's

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