Elementality vs dfunk
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriding
No Hate Votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-28-05 at 04:15 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

dfunk has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-25-05 04:16 PM.

Nigga you need some morphine to calm down /
Everytime you face me, i stomp your ass to the ground /
How many times have i already broken ya neck ? /
Enough times for your bitch momma to spend her check /
On your medical expenses, nigga buy some glasses /
You can't see me on the net, let's not even talk 'bout 3D /
You can be Jet* nigga, I'll embody Bruce Lee /
Excuse me, but we got ourselves a pussy /
Elementality you far away from reality /
I'm Sub-Zero* nigga, I always finish with a "fatality"* /

* Jet = Jet Li , the actor
* Sub-Zero = Mortal Kombat Character
* fatality = finishing move in MK

Elementality has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-25-05 04:24 PM.

Uppin this.. show luv..... lets gooooooooooooooooo

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Voted For: Elementality

wordizzle....pretty gay battle here

dfunk...i see you improved from your last battle...but still needs alot of elevating....your lines and punches are too basic, they need more punch to em man, plus, everythin is either played or weak as hell "How many times have i already broken ya neck ? /
Enough times for your bitch momma to spend her check" not a punch man....fake personal and its stupid....so, try to think of shit that will actually diss the guy, and make people laugh and go, ahah, he got owned, know what im talkin bout....because alot of your shit is just random fillers...it got ok at the end...but the fatality line has been done before

element....not bad...first verse here i see.....you gettin my vote because you actually hit with a punch...and a personal i think....so, basing of that........thats all really i have to base off....you can still elevate alot....because you had some potentials in there, but wordplay was kinda gay....so it ruined some....but you have nice stuff...just elevate....word

v/elementality

Thanks for the input Kesse. I appriciate it. Will try to get better.

Yes, thank-you. Upping this battle for some more votes.

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Voted For: Elementality

Elementality...
For those who dont know this kid just can't flow
I mean check his rec his only win... is a no show
Good personal/punch...7/10
Just look at his spit this kid thinks hes true O.G
Hes just a weak ass bitch who cant recite A to Z
Eh...nothing to special....6/10
His intelect is so out of date, when he spits come out ancient
The shit you try and burn me with just makes us all impatient
Good flow, good use of vocabulary...7/10
You wish you could stop the violent force of my mentality
I'll make you so unstable you'll start rockn beastiality
...Self glorification/kinda a punch...good vocab...6/10

[B]Overall: 26/40


dfunk...
Nigga you need some morphine to calm down /
Everytime you face me, i stomp your ass to the ground /
No to this punch....4/10
How many times have i already broken ya neck ? /
Enough times for your bitch momma to spend her check /
I don't think you ever broke his neck, and this punch sucked....3/10
On your medical expenses, nigga buy some glasses /
You can't see me on the net, let's not even talk 'bout 3D /
Doesn't make any sense at all.....3/10
You can be Jet* nigga, I'll embody Bruce Lee /
Excuse me, but we got ourselves a pussy /
This was probably your best punch...and it wasn't that good...4/10
Elementality you far away from reality /
I'm Sub-Zero* nigga, I always finish with a "fatality"* /
Self-glorification is fuckin' gay....3/10

Overall: 17/50


Broke it down and Elementality came harder....so....

Vote: Elementality

Voted For: Elementality

EL WINS......

BETTER STRUCTUR, U HAD BETA EVERYTHING REALLY,
FUNK YA SHITS TOO BASIC........
ELEVATE

up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up

Voted For: Elementality

Elementality
For those who dont know this kid just can't flow
I mean check his rec his only win... is a no show
Just look at his spit this kid thinks hes true O.G
Hes just a weak ass bitch who cant recite A to Z
His intelect is so out of date, when he spits come out ancient
The shit you try and burn me with just makes us all impatient
You wish you could stop the violent force of my mentality
I'll make you so unstable you'll start rockn beastiality

like some punches
work on structure
good attemppted punches
need to elevate more

6.5/10

d funk
IP:


Nigga you need some morphine to calm down /
Everytime you face me, i stomp your ass to the ground /
How many times have i already broken ya neck ? /
Enough times for your bitch momma to spend her check /
On your medical expenses, nigga buy some glasses /
You can't see me on the net, let's not even talk 'bout 3D /
You can be Jet* nigga, I'll embody Bruce Lee /
Excuse me, but we got ourselves a pussy /
Elementality you far away from reality /
I'm Sub-Zero* nigga, I always finish with a "fatality"* /

like sum of ur lyrics
used punches at good times
nice structure
u also need 2 elevate

very sad battle but my vote goes 2 elementality
v/elementality

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