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Adapt VS Devine Visionary
First to 7. NO ko
22 Bar Maximum. NO Dickryding NO RECYCLING NO BITING NO GAY SHIT! |
alright adapt i'm bouncing for the week end so here's my verse.
Spitting flames…programmed to maim…directed at ya torso…to leave flesh dripping from your frame… Feel the strain…as I infiltrate ya veins..travel through each passage and disconnect the brain… It's devastating pain…in this torture game…DNA splits like atoms as your blood gets drained… Experience the wrath…as you see my spirit pass…extract ya spinal chord and slice your mass in half… Blood drippin from parts…destined for the bath……as I pummel fists at your cranium and ya skull falls between your calf's… I'll tear the limbs apart…death from the start…muscles ripped to pieces as I puncture holes in your heart… This mind is so unique…aligned with my speech…pulling out your eyeballs til the pupils meet your feet… Unable to be beat…so pay attention as I speak…I'll make you eat your verse, just so you can taste defeat… Your futures fucking bleak…as I creep deep and inject morphine into ya bloodstream to leave you to rot within a week… Who can last the distance…as my tongue spits like pistons…showering you with acid to burn through your resistance?… Body covered in blisters…screaming like an infant…as I scorch ya tissue with fireballs and end your existence… Killing your persistence…with my fist punch…striking you with multiple blows until you crumble in an instant… Thought forms like halogen…to damage shallow men…thrust my foot deep through ya back until my toes split ya abdomen… Rib fracturing…both lungs jacking in…I'll even duplicate ya mind because you need to think twice about this battle again… punch time kids Rip this textcee in my range have him in ashes like a smoker deranged,, adapt's mediocre and lame also not makin 'much sense' like 'sofa change',, Like departments stores im 'rappin tighter' u ate on the 'web' like im a snacking spider ,, Im the attacking tiger and i heard yah girl left cuz you fail to 'fill her up' like appetizers,, Im notorious at gay bashing and 'revealing your fakeness' like playmates flashing,, Im into 'Roc-A-Fella' fashion and i 'hit close to home' like that Pentagon crashing*,, Lol this punk is candid one swing and your face is underhanded,, Your left stranded when i 'steal this win/wind' like asthma pump bandits g'luck |
im busy.. ill start keying now..
and finish this up late toite. konfidential. koz. epdemik. logic. off~center. golden child. bareknuckle. pz |
you want me to flow??
faggot.. devine-visionary look at him dickryde-me, you sad exscuse of an-emcee. its true i bless-the-mic, ignite-the-knight with skill in the midst of a-mic-fight. you TEXTcee.. only time you write essays.. is when you scribe your-homeboys!! you fucking-toy. visionary could rep. my location.. and still not make illa-noise! boy.. only time your up-to-par, is when your dyslexic and on your favorite-RAP-star![ohshit] fight-hard, and pull-cards. devine lost focus, when i stole your fucking ford-car. and beat you with a telescope.. till visionarys left seein-stars! its just wrong.. that only time you have dope bars.. is when you blow lines at the corner-pub! you saw my verse and was like.. oh-fuck! clovers waste.. your shit out-of-luck! your aw-struck. get all-buck-wild. rhyme schemes too ill.. even-YOU-smiled. wow.. im rusty as hell.. keep the key going. how do you expect to beat me? half of your victories.. arent even victories!! see, the only reason cats no showed.. is cuz your not worth our time-of-day. blew-you-away. my styles like mantises.. meaning visionary has-to-pray. left devine in-dismay. saw my word-play and was like my avatar no-way! on every-day. i spray-heat and blaze-streets that make you meet-defeat. well.. hows-he-look? or how about setting a worm is the only time you-see-hooks!! fucking-crook.. how many lines you bit? chances are your style..i invented-it! laughing off-my-ass. split yourwig like cutting european style-in-half! ouch.. im still rusty.. 4 punches to end this the good way.. left ya with memories as scars. been to a "bar" lately? cuz your catchin booz. d.v., ya mine as well "get the neuse". adapt'll be cool and let ya hang with this. and i'll "have a hand" in your whole demise.. sHiT, ya been CUT AT WRIST! it's been said you have some skill. 5$ slut? well, i guess ill make the PRICE CUT! pz man. if you dont understand everything i said.. then dont vote because you dont get it. |
Devine is a biter.
If you need a link. Just ask. pZ. |
^Drop the link dawg.....
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drop the link sicc.
pz oh and slow.. i haven't battled in probably 7 or 8 weeks. so i got a hugeass exscuse here. |
either way im finna win.
lmmfao.. vote vets vote. |
this battle was fuckin weak.... but adapt took it
Devine - i dunno if you could have used a more simpler rhyme scheme.... brain/pain/ blah... WACK wasn't feelin it at all.... flow was off... multis were a lil there but nothin serious... seemed half assed to me.... and in your punch time shyt... you were talkin about yourself half the lines "Im the attacking tiger and i heard yah girl........." "Im notorious at gay bashing and 'revealing your ......." "Im into 'Roc-A-Fella' fashion and i 'hit close to home......." I,I,I don't think those I lines are punches...just cuz you throw garbage wordplay like web-spiders shyt.... i'm sorry but i didn't feel you verse at all.... and i aint about to sugar coat shyt.... you started to heat up at the end.... but no punches stood out to me.... adapt - get off the illa noise shyt.... its seriously been played for like 2 years.... i saw a lot of played lines in ya verse.... "devine lost focus, when i stole your fucking ford-car." "ya mine as well "get the neuse". adapt'll be cool and let ya hang with this." but you did make an attempt to throw punches and be creative about it.... your verse was put together better and wasn't as choppy structure even though you were pushin it flow wise.... this battle was not impressive.... throw some fuckin personals for chirst sake.... wordplay..... metaz..... i know or hope yall didn't go all out on these verses..... vote - adapt peaz.... [1].. |
nah b.. that was keyed..
and my first in 7 weeks? probably a little longer. |
I deleted a lot of the votes that won't count,and kept the posts about the biting because it could be useful in the future...........now to the battle......
When it comes to flow,I would say Adapt took it,both went a little rough at times,but here is a break down.... Quote:
He had a lot of multies in his verse,which helped it flow,but the rhyme scheme was way too basic,as compared to Adapts,thats were Adapt comes stronger... Quote:
Not much better in those first lines,but a more complicated structure,thats what gave him a stronger flow.... Now look at the wordplay.... Quote:
That is one of your better lines,which their isn't much wordplay in your verse,or any that hits hard anyways.... Quote:
Adapts wordplay was mixed with some personals,and general wordplay through out the verse,as for Devine,they were mixed with fillers,which made the punches not hit hard...So adapt took it their.... Now punches Quote:
thats what majority of devines punches were like,which made him come weak at times,too much fillers and real basic general punches...... Quote:
Adapt had a more direct punches..... wordplay=Adapt Flow=Adapt punches=Adapt overall vote=Adapt |
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2-0 Huh! this should be rich. |
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