FREESTYLE DaBOSS vs hood_dawg
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-28-05 at 01:44 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

hood_dawg has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 01:45 PM.

FREESTYLE DaBOSS has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 01:45 PM.

YO hood dawg listen up, yo ass is a dud//
I'll light ya ass up, they'll put ya body in mud//
Nigga I play all rough//
I leave ya face all scuffed//
I swell ya chest up now you look all buff//
Check who you talkin' to//
I know who I'm talkin' to//
Don't wanna die by yaself, then the bullets will
walk you through//
Ya name is "hood dawg", but you ain't got shit in ya
pockets//
You popped a couple X pills and yo ass just lost it//
Ya flow is not poppin'//
Ya hoes are not bobbin'//
Nigga call me death I'm at ya front door knockin//
Don't be that boy wit a target on ya head//
Blood soaked carpet cause of bullets to ya head//
You should know you can't fuck wit me kid//
You better off doin' crack suckin' on somebodies
dick//

fuck, you aint spittin, ur verse probably prewritten
does it look like im kiddin boy what the fuck u shittin
u probably callin me wack like you knew me
but we all know who be the real newbie
u aint no real underground rapper
u just a disgraceful bitch slapper
honestly this kid looks like a 50 cent wannabe
u look way outta normal preportion
ur ma shoulda had an abortion
u suck so i aint even tryin

Voted For: hood_dawg

wow! this battle was kinda wack, but i gota give it up to hood dawg. i think he came way better. hood, c'mon man. i kno u been elevating, but just look at yo line lengths. they aint even tha same size dawg. wuddup wit that? lol. just work on ur structure homie, that was way off, but i could see u were on tha right track wit punches and some good personals, u just gota keep tryin. fuck ya record, if u keep battle good people, u will learn off them and ur mistakes when you keep losing, then u will elevate. but a nice verse, wack structure. better punshes and attempt.
daboss-yo shit was way off homie. slacking in structure also, but i think u are makin a left in punches and shit. not too decent. they were aight, and ur wordplay, but u need to learrn wat a bar is and keep that "/" outa ya verses, thats looks wack and ignorant.
overall- i think hood took this with more elevation, and better punches, and shit. keep elevating, and if u need help PM me. u wont be tha only one, im still helpin out everybody. good drop. keep doin it.

~1~

and check out my battle wit j rin, hit it up for me homie. ~1~

Voted For: hood_dawg

i think this battle was mad wack. structures were way off, and flow was too. i dont know. im leaning closer towards hood dawg in this one. i think he took my vote. i was just feelin his more. i wasnt feelin freestyle's verse at all. next time, dont freestyle it. lol. nah, but this battle was kinda wack and i could see yall need work. hood dawg, i think u had a better attempt at disses, thats why i gave u tha vote.

Voted For: hood_dawg

votin for hood dawg


hood got this to to a strait to the point style of verse.

ya both had pretty nice punches but dawgs were a little harder then frees so hood got the punches

both had good strucutre so props on that
didnt see any personals from either of you
didnt see any multies from either of you either

i liked ya punches hood jus elevate on those personals
free get a lil stronger on you punces n personals

good battle fams

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Voted For: FREESTYLE DaBOSS

For Not Being Cheezy And So Damn Basic .. No Need For Explanation Really

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Voted For: hood_dawg

LOL hood_dawg had this battle..
structure=8/10
wordplay=8/10
punches=9/10
creativity=7/10
flow=9/10
TOTAL=41/50