DAZZLE vs LyricalMa$tamind
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
house rules
1 verse only

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-30-05 at 04:24 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

LyricalMa$tamind has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 04:29 PM.

Ill break your spine just to kill some time...we know whos better/
Those sorry rhymes make UR verse look more like an apology letter/
No matter the weather/ Ill bring the reign so step back ho/
Dope? nope/..Cause this airhead was elevatin….till I popped his ego/
I could come dope/ but Ill half ass and sail to victory at half mast/
U a newb wit no chance of beatin me/
my rhymez iz more hotta den an oven heata be/
This battles for a joke and a laugh... I feel sorry 4 this poor fuck/
I would drop garbage…and this kid would be there to pick it up/
ur beat u destroyed don't eva return/
cause i got u in ashes like i carry ur urn!
HOLLA!

quik spit but w/e
i wanna c wut ur verse iz like so hurry up and accept da battle and spit

DAZZLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 05:41 PM.

Ayo, step to my groove, move like this
Im gonna shoot this bitch, of course im ruthless
Yo lyrics aint masta,like ya job, you shit
Ima grill this bitch, stir, fry and bake
Im tha real thing prick,but your pure a fake
i peeped your profile, man im sure your gay
"im black wit short hair,now u wanna date?"
Rapper from G town, you down to "Kapone"
my rhymes set you alight,melt down the clown
this bitch been dazzled, beat by an unknown!

His occupation is "shiattt"
Hes from G town
Hes losing to someone called Kapone
Im new so am unknown

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

this was easy.....word

dazzle....you gotta get a ggood grasp of punchs man....your shit was basic and weak as hell, i think since you're new, you dont really know, so maybe check the tutorials or sump, cause your punches barely hit, most shit seemed like fillers or random sentances....not bad structure, flow, decent.....up vocab and wordplay though, that was weak....and clown donesn't rhyme with unknown....word, elevate, keep up yo

LM.....giving you this for having at least one decent punch land...you had some good shit in there, some wording was crap, and you really need to work on structure, keep it consistent man, make it look nice too so it can flow better, word....but i actually kinda laughed at some of your shit, was refreshing from some of the other battles ive read lately, so you seem to have a good grip on things, so keep elevating man, you'll do fine........word, RTF, if you could eh

v/lyricalmastermind.....for harder punches/personals.....no hate

thanx 4 da vote dawg
ay yall we stiil need sum votes so leave good feedback and post da vote
HOLLA!

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Vote Lyrical Mastermind.........

yo DAZZLE - you came wid the lame gangsta, played a s a mofocka lines that show lil creativity and arent even hard hitting, flow was off in some bars, and some of it didnt make sense...elevate homie,,up your vocab, originality and personal use

L.Mastermind - your drop was wack as well, a few funny lines, u switched up your flow and used a it of multi flow in there, litle originality, a lot of it ha been done before..u need some personals cos a lot of ur bars were generic...ur opener was ill tho dope ass wordplay...up vocab, creativity and personal use.. :thumbup:

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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

A'ight...this was battle was only...well...yeah it was pretty bad....but Mastermind takes this for better punches. Both need to work on structure...both need to work on bar length, line length...both need to work on punches, but Mastermind had the better on this. Blah battle....

...But Mastermind takes it...

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

V/LyricalMastamind.....good battle close but he gets my vote he came wit good punchs that were creative an consistent also good personals an structure.....dazzle u had a good opener but u were to basic from their work on ur punchs an vocab also use more personals....No hate
RETURN THE FAVOR...
opner=tie
closer=l
structure=tie
punch=L
vocab=l
personals=l
overall=Lyricalmastamind

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

v/lyrical

Dazzle: yo i liked ur flow u got some good personals but stuff was pretty basic

Lyrical: Yo ur opener sealed the battle kid lol ur lines were pretty good