BKadAnt vs mizz fyre
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-30-05 at 04:57 PM

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BKadAnt has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 04:59 PM.

forgot topic is money..............................

mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 05:01 PM.

Trust I got da green you need either cash or grass
Rushin home cuz only da livin room can fit the stash
Huge stacks built tall and thats only my 'fifty'
Cuz Im makin dat money so 'Bank$' get wit me
Im good in 'the game' cuz Im runnin da 'yayo'
Im hood in the brain got 'sha money' on payroll
It's a dilemma Kelly Rowland can I pay your bills?
Got chedda Nelly holdin weight'll break high heels

Came from the gutter, no father, barely had a mother
doing time for murder, still he looked up to his brother
growing up, so rough, no-one to help him with his dreams
stuck in a trap, he'd never get out of, or so it seemed

teamed up with a friend, worked hard, days seemed neverending
determined to save everything he had, hardly ever spending
attending business meetings, sometimes falling asleep, so tired
but kept on going coz by his son, he was so inspired

10 years on, school reunion, he's not what peeps expected
bowing down at his feet coz money's made him respected
lost his fam in the process thats when times were tough
gambling, coz what he had then was never enough

now cash in hand, it means nothing, what he wants he can't buy
nice house, nice car, still somethin missin, can't figure out why
tryna remember his sons laughter, but its all in vain
had his heart broken, he knows money can't ease the pain

aight vote it up ya'll.................................

Voted For: mizz fyre

Aii This is what I feel

Mizz Fyre
You bruth The Fyre lol On This Verse I Think You hade a very good Style Far as your Creativity and ya Feelin that you put into your verse really makes it a whole lot more fun to read and i think that you should never change ya style no matta what nobody say stick to what you know ....and youll go far
^ My Vote

Bkandant

I Think that when somebody gives you the minumum Number of lines to do you should always do extra jus incase bcuz ya never know what you gonna say if you limit yaself

You hade a very short piece i feel that you shouldnt limit yaself when ppl give you a minumum

Please RTF iin the link in my sig PLEASE it will be greatly appreciated

^^^^thanx for voting.....up ya'll..................

Thanz for voting? :roll:

I voted bcuz i wanted you to Return The favor in the link in my sig

Please do that My Battles gettin slept on

Voted For: mizz fyre

mizz fyre
Came from the gutter, no father, barely had a mother
doing time for murder, still he looked up to his brother
growing up, so rough, no-one to help him with his dreams
stuck in a trap, he'd never get out of, or so it seemed

teamed up with a friend, worked hard, days seemed neverending
determined to save everything he had, hardly ever spending
attending business meetings, sometimes falling asleep, so tired
but kept on going coz by his son, he was so inspired

10 years on, school reunion, he's not what peeps expected
bowing down at his feet coz money's made him respected
lost his fam in the process thats when times were tough
gambling, coz what he had then was never enough

now cash in hand, it means nothing, what he wants he can't buy
nice house, nice car, still somethin missin, can't figure out why
tryna remember his sons laughter, but its all in vain
had his heart broken, he knows money can't ease the pain

likin da verse
nice lyrics
real good flow
good structure easy 2 read
nice elevation and closure
7/10

BkadAntIP:


Trust I got da green you need either cash or grass
Rushin home cuz only da livin room can fit the stash
Huge stacks built tall and thats only my 'fifty'
Cuz Im makin dat money so 'Bank$' get wit me
Im good in 'the game' cuz Im runnin da 'yayo'
Im hood in the brain got 'sha money' on payroll
It's a dilemma Kelly Rowland can I pay your bills?
Got chedda Nelly holdin weight'll break high heels

not bad verse
shorter den opponents
nice lines
good flo
elevate more
structure iight
no hate jus elevate
6/10

my v/mizz fyre 4 betta lines and lyrics

^^^^^^^thanx for voting........up.................

Voted For: mizz fyre

Dis seemed like a topical.But just da message and battle,
Mizz got dis.Just read both and compare,Mizz I think is better
Keep it up both

Voted For: mizz fyre

Vote for mizz fyre

this battle seemed akward than a bitch an' a half, but here:

BKadAnt:

Trust I got da green you need either cash or grass
Rushin home cuz only da livin room can fit the stash
-wtf, nothin here,nopunch weak

Huge stacks built tall and thats only my 'fifty'
Cuz Im makin dat money so 'Bank$' get wit me
-nigga pleaz, weak, self-glorification, nothin

Im good in 'the game' cuz Im runnin da 'yayo'
Im hood in the brain got 'sha money' on payroll
-fuck dawg, nothin again, no punching

It's a dilemma Kelly Rowland can I pay your bills?
Got chedda Nelly holdin weight'll break high heels
-not a damn thang here, no closer

-overall:aight rhyme for just a fuck around verse, but dawg, no punches were swung at all, in tha least bit, clown tha mothafucka that ya battle cause ya ain't got shit here but words nigga

mizz fyre:

Came from the gutter, no father, barely had a mother
doing time for murder, still he looked up to his brother
-can be considered a light jab goin' at his esteem,still ain't much so don't think it's much

growing up, so rough, no-one to help him with his dreams
stuck in a trap, he'd never get out of, or so it seemed
-light hook on 'em, lil bit of downplay in this bar

teamed up with a friend, worked hard, days seemed neverending
determined to save everything he had, hardly ever spending
-lil sumthin', sayin' he a broke ass nigga wit dreamz that he workin hard for but they ain't comin

attending business meetings, sometimes falling asleep, so tired
but kept on going coz by his son, he was so inspired
-glorified his determination-nothin

10 years on, school reunion, he's not what peeps expected
bowing down at his feet coz money's made him respected
-glorified his doe,-nothin

lost his fam in the process thats when times were tough
gambling, coz what he had then was never enough
-not feelin it

now cash in hand, it means nothing, what he wants he can't buy
nice house, nice car, still somethin missin, can't figure out why
-showin his depression, very lil

tryna remember his sons laughter, but its all in vain
had his heart broken, he knows money can't ease the pain
-no 'battle' closer material, but yea

-overall:mizz, ya needa stick to ya topical thang, you was tryin to work that type of rhyme here, you gotta clown, downplay, high-side, murk, diss, an kill a nigga on this shit gurl. check that for future reference, you had some multis though

this shit go to mizz for havin somethin that nicked ol dude an ol dude didn't do shit so thats what it be people

hit up this link honest
violation-to-va vs. Nephew J (3-2)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=119107

^^^^^lol this was a topical battle ya'll............................but thanx for voting