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SINISTER 03-28-05 01:49 AM

Renegade
 
:shoot: Renegade

Some pepole ask where i get inspiration
How About,Drugs Vodka and 3 Years Probation
These Tears Are Black, I have Satin in The Basment
The Basment in my head, The Ligitimate Placement///
The Other Day I Was Sitting Outside
Blinded By The Light Witch I Confuse With Dark
Combine Time Stains Of Pain Will Heal
Benith It All, I Still Dont Feel
If I Could Go Back I Wouldent Change A Thing
Thoughts Of Pain, But i Remember Everything
Sing To The Music, Curse My Name
Kindness For Weakness I Am Not In Vain
Say What You Say i Remain Untame
Craving Of Remorse Drives Me In Sane
Now All Left A Blank
Make Me Picture Perfect
Florecent Paint
More Essance Than Holy Stakes
Like The Chosen One I Will Be Slain
Help Me Break The Glass Wall
Darkness Rains My Parade
I Am A Renegade

The Militant 03-28-05 01:58 AM

pretty good shit good flow stayed on topic thourgh out the whole verse vocab was tight structre was a lil off but all around a good verse
7.5/10

please return the favor in my open mic "GENERAL"

Kawn Flixx 03-28-05 05:40 PM

Need 1 link by tomorrow or this will be closed


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