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MarvJay1009 (1-0) vs. sdizzle (1-0)
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checkin in.........
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boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers *does marv jay stretched style.. except with a good punch* kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it |
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dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick..... when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack... yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq".... fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap... cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date".... 1st bar-look at his title its say GONE I QUIT... |
meh its clear sdizzle got this... he had punches and some personals.. nice flow.. on the other hand marvjay hand no flow... and some decent punches but nothing really hard hitting nah what im saying..
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boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday only thing queens niggaz run is far far away decent a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language …nah quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers decent punch kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it okay, could’ve been harder MARVJay1009 dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick..... when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT persona was good, punch was okay cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack... yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq".... weak punch fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. uhhh decent u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap... cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date".... nope v/ MARV |
uhhh this was actually close cuz sdizzle came as wack as Marv..
a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language (pretty good meta and punch) Vs. fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. (punch was wack but good meta) So i think i gotta give this to Sdizzle because he actually had a decent punch and a good meta while Marv only had a good meta and no hard punches. Vote: Sdizzle |
boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away funny, nice opener! a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language NO! not feelin this! quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers pretty gud! kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it not bad....... dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick..... when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT nice personal, gud opener! cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack... yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq".... alright punch! fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. nice!! gud multi, nice meta!! u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap... cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date".... bleh!! weak closer! V/- MarvJ |
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^ its a simile :)... similes use like or as, metaphors are a direct comparison sdizzles mad monkeyish today is a metaphor sdizzle is like a monkey today is a simile see? |
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be4 u dickride da nigga cuzz he koed ya stupid ass last week..."a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language" sombody tell me did dat ryhme???? |
boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers \ yo, this is the definition of simple. i dont understand why sdizzle came like this, but the hottest line in this was the queens and running far away. the drug dealer line was played the spanish symbol line wasnt good. i guess he really didnt care anymore. , , dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick..... when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack... yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq".... fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. / marv shit was good, but the 1st line was kinda predictable personal, and the force it line was forced. the brain in iraq line was good. overall marv got better shit, and it was kinda stretched but he came harder than sdizzle v/marv |
quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it vs. NOTHING Dizzle is seriously being dicked out of this battle.. I don't give a fuck what anybody says.. MarvJay lost, and if you think he won then you're either a dickrider or fucking retarded. Vote - Sdizzle. |
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*cough* says nothing but nods in agreement *cough* also... name, shit language rhyme perfecty *cough* sad thing is all my lines were true.... quote here quote there *cough* *leaves thread* |
fam u could barley make ya words ryhme.....u had da study me da write a 8 line verse i neva seen ya seen till we had da battle
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